Thread: not again...

Powerful poem!

Seemed more like a rap ^^;;

The rhyming worked well, but was over used..

It seemed very lustful hehe but maybe you could of used better wording?

I really liked this poem though, it expressed how you feel clearly! Nice work!

and i know i can't be in love
but your like angel sent from above
and i'm the devil in the flesh
reaper of souls, bringer of death
^^^^^AWESOME
cool poem like ^he^ said its like a rap but thats what rap is right a poem(basically)
well thats what it used to be hate rap but good poem ^__^

let me now if you don't mind I want to quote you in my sig.^___^ I'll make sure people know who wrote it

hey pretty cool poem. i like the first stanza!! good job.

I agree with Kerry, coz the poems would sound better if it didn't rhymed so much...^^;;;;

The last stanza really captured me. It was really nice ^^
And another thing is that it DOES sound lustful....well, maybe that's what u wanted to potray ^^;;; Nice work

very nice solking, i didnt know u wrote poems....anyways i have to start writing some since i've bin lagging behind.....but i like ur poem on how it's like a love between an angle n devil

keep it up

its relly not the types of poems i like but that one is good eney more?

babe you always have had something special. i lvoed the last stanza, talking about how pieces of you belong to different ppl. im in the same situation, so i offer no advice, or i would advise myself. deep feelings always came through in you.

>K<