Not to be, But to be

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I like the subject choice. Now, corrent punctuation and capitalization is needed.

The title has caught my attention. I thought I was reading wrong so I read it over 5 times before I actually read the poem. You covered a lot of good things and showed a lot of the positive in life. Most of the poems I see only speak of sadness and pain. Life isn't always about that.

thanks !!!!!!!! i was just writing this one. just want to see what people would think. :)

KOOLIE I TOLD YA I"D READ AND COMMENT SO HERES MY COMMENT PROOF READ LOL

thanks you !!!!!!!!!!!!! i kwen you would read it :)

I love it and it is so true, and that how detroit is but you nailed it girl