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    Arrow Not emo but emotional

    Never been this lonely,
    Never been this heartbroken,
    Never been in this pain,
    Never been so poignant

    Hell it has been for me, so much pain
    Enduring pain and agony
    As I lived on people gave me grief even the ones I loved
    Rowing down the stream of tears
    Tormented, hurt, stabbed in the heart… words can’t describe it.

    Been always this way for me, one way or another
    Risking my happiness for people I cared about
    Oh God why must I suffer, why this kind of torture?
    Keeping my anguish inside unnoticed by the world
    Everything I once wished for, a simple wish, shattered into pieces
    Never getting rid of this agony as more tears fill my life

    Always been like this for me,
    Giving happiness to them and all I got was pain
    Only hoping to break free but the chain of misery kept me down
    No more tears I made myself believe but I ended up miserable
    Yes death was the only way to free but why me!

    What did I do to deserve this?
    Why do tears fill up my precious eyes?
    Why did I even cared in the first place
    Why does my heart have to be so vulnerable!

    All I wanted is to be loved!
    All I ever desired is to be remembered
    And all I got were chains that wrapped me around the slab of cold misery

    Have you ever experienced this?
    If you have you know how much it hurts
    Yet I am the one who suffered greatest
    Never got to live, never got to be happy

    I was the only one, a flower of hope
    That was wrapped in chains
    Tied down to a cold slab of misery and torture…

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    Re: Not emo but emotional

    Hell it has been for me, so much pain
    Enduring pain and agony
    As I lived on people gave me grief even the ones I loved
    Rowing down the stream of tears
    Tormented, hurt, stabbed in the heart… words can’t describe it.

    Been always this way for me, one way or another
    Risking my happiness for people I cared about
    Oh God why must I suffer, why this kind of torture?
    Keeping my anguish inside unnoticed by the world
    Everything I once wished for, a simple wish, shattered into pieces
    Never getting rid of this agony as more tears fill my life

    Always been like this for me,
    Giving happiness to them and all I got was pain
    Only hoping to break free but the chain of misery kept me down
    No more tears I made myself believe but I ended up miserable
    Yes death was the only way to free but why me
    This part was very awesome,i liked it. You have a great composition. Keep it up!

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    Re: Not emo but emotional

    .......................... it was good i guess.>_>

    keep up the good work. nice use of EMOtional words.

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    Re: Not emo but emotional

    Okay I got the point >_> But they help get me EMOtions out >_<

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    Re: Not emo but emotional

    woah.
    nice!!!
    it must take a long time to contruct those word into that final...
    very good Rave_Grip!!!
    i like this poem!!
    hope the next poem of your poem i read is bringing happyness... (^_^)
    but, this one is very good for me.

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    Re: Not emo but emotional

    omg that poem sooOooo got to me TT__TT its soOooo buteful (i stell cant spell) but i love it its very real i like it but i hope something like that has never happend u TT__TT *hugs*

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    Re: Not emo but emotional

    well your good with the heart broke agony you dont wee that every day i have to give it to you, your a real artist, keep it up

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    Re: Not emo but emotional

    I like the way you used your words here breaking each letter down into a verse of a poem or song! Nice job of breaking away form the original structure of poems!

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