Not emo but emotional

*Rave_Grip* · Oct 17, 2006, 05:44 AM

Never been this lonely,
Never been this heartbroken,
Never been in this pain,
Never been so poignant

Hell it has been for me, so much pain
Enduring pain and agony
As I lived on people gave me grief even the ones I loved
Rowing down the stream of tears
Tormented, hurt, stabbed in the heart… words can’t describe it.

Been always this way for me, one way or another
Risking my happiness for people I cared about
Oh God why must I suffer, why this kind of torture?
Keeping my anguish inside unnoticed by the world
Everything I once wished for, a simple wish, shattered into pieces
Never getting rid of this agony as more tears fill my life

Always been like this for me,
Giving happiness to them and all I got was pain
Only hoping to break free but the chain of misery kept me down
No more tears I made myself believe but I ended up miserable
Yes death was the only way to free but why me!

What did I do to deserve this?
Why do tears fill up my precious eyes?
Why did I even cared in the first place
Why does my heart have to be so vulnerable!

All I wanted is to be loved!
All I ever desired is to be remembered
And all I got were chains that wrapped me around the slab of cold misery

Have you ever experienced this?
If you have you know how much it hurts
Yet I am the one who suffered greatest
Never got to live, never got to be happy

I was the only one, a flower of hope
That was wrapped in chains
Tied down to a cold slab of misery and torture…

Pride_Edward · Oct 17, 2006, 05:49 AM

Quote:

Hell it has been for me, so much pain
Enduring pain and agony
As I lived on people gave me grief even the ones I loved
Rowing down the stream of tears
Tormented, hurt, stabbed in the heart… words can’t describe it.

Been always this way for me, one way or another
Risking my happiness for people I cared about
Oh God why must I suffer, why this kind of torture?
Keeping my anguish inside unnoticed by the world
Everything I once wished for, a simple wish, shattered into pieces
Never getting rid of this agony as more tears fill my life

Always been like this for me,
Giving happiness to them and all I got was pain
Only hoping to break free but the chain of misery kept me down
No more tears I made myself believe but I ended up miserable
Yes death was the only way to free but why me

This part was very awesome,i liked it. You have a great composition. Keep it up!

*princesslady* · Oct 17, 2006, 05:55 AM

.......................... it was good i guess.>_>

keep up the good work. nice use of EMOtional words.

*Rave_Grip* · Oct 17, 2006, 06:00 AM

Okay I got the point >_> But they help get me EMOtions out >_<

baikuza · Oct 18, 2006, 10:02 AM

woah.
nice!!!
it must take a long time to contruct those word into that final...
very good Rave_Grip!!!
i like this poem!!
hope the next poem of your poem i read is bringing happyness... (^_^)
but, this one is very good for me.

*equinn* · Oct 20, 2006, 07:58 AM

omg that poem sooOooo got to me TT__TT its soOooo buteful (i stell cant spell) but i love it its very real i like it but i hope something like that has never happend u TT__TT *hugs*

*hellknight* · Oct 20, 2006, 08:01 AM

well your good with the heart broke agony you dont wee that every day i have to give it to you, your a real artist, keep it up

*BlueFox1* · Oct 20, 2006, 08:48 AM

I like the way you used your words here breaking each letter down into a verse of a poem or song! Nice job of breaking away form the original structure of poems!

SousukeSagara · Oct 20, 2006, 12:28 PM

It's very emotional though... I see it in every stanzas... They are very clear... I can die now after I read this...

*Rave_Grip* · Oct 20, 2006, 06:34 PM

Some humble belongings are meant to die for, not my poem >_<

*ketaro* · Oct 20, 2006, 08:22 PM

Dude that emo poem was pretty awesome.

Oct 17, 2006, 05:44 AM	#1 (permalink)
Rave_Grip I hate idiots on AO. Kill Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: Life is an illusion. Posts: 2,337 Thanks: 0 Thanked 11 Times in 11 Posts Credits: 16,710	Not emo but emotional Never been this lonely, Never been this heartbroken, Never been in this pain, Never been so poignant Hell it has been for me, so much pain Enduring pain and agony As I lived on people gave me grief even the ones I loved Rowing down the stream of tears Tormented, hurt, stabbed in the heart… words can’t describe it. Been always this way for me, one way or another Risking my happiness for people I cared about Oh God why must I suffer, why this kind of torture? Keeping my anguish inside unnoticed by the world Everything I once wished for, a simple wish, shattered into pieces Never getting rid of this agony as more tears fill my life Always been like this for me, Giving happiness to them and all I got was pain Only hoping to break free but the chain of misery kept me down No more tears I made myself believe but I ended up miserable Yes death was the only way to free but why me! What did I do to deserve this? Why do tears fill up my precious eyes? Why did I even cared in the first place Why does my heart have to be so vulnerable! All I wanted is to be loved! All I ever desired is to be remembered And all I got were chains that wrapped me around the slab of cold misery Have you ever experienced this? If you have you know how much it hurts Yet I am the one who suffered greatest Never got to live, never got to be happy I was the only one, a flower of hope That was wrapped in chains Tied down to a cold slab of misery and torture… __________________ I tried. \| .:~My AO Gallery~:. \| \| .:~The AO Rules~:. \|
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Rave_Grip I hate idiots on AO. Kill Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: Life is an illusion. Posts: 2,337 Thanks: 0 Thanked 11 Times in 11 Posts Credits: 16,710	Re: Not emo but emotional Okay I got the point >_> But they help get me EMOtions out >_< __________________ I tried. \| .:~My AO Gallery~:. \| \| .:~The AO Rules~:. \|
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baikuza Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: should i? Posts: 298 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 110	Re: Not emo but emotional woah. nice!!! it must take a long time to contruct those word into that final... very good Rave_Grip!!! i like this poem!! hope the next poem of your poem i read is bringing happyness... (^_^) but, this one is very good for me. __________________ .: Gallery :. .: My Live Space :.
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Rave_Grip I hate idiots on AO. Kill Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: Life is an illusion. Posts: 2,337 Thanks: 0 Thanked 11 Times in 11 Posts Credits: 16,710	Re: Not emo but emotional Some humble belongings are meant to die for, not my poem >_< __________________ I tried. \| .:~My AO Gallery~:. \| \| .:~The AO Rules~:. \|
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