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Not Enough
Cooking into the eyes,
Of those I despise,
As I slowly drift away from everything they say.
Their words break,
their words burn,
but they will never learn,
their words just aren't enough.
You see it's not enough to kill me,
not enough to heal me,
and not enough to set me free.
You're not enough to kill me,
not enough to heal me,
not enough to set me free from my well of misery.
I'm too strong,
you've judged me for far too long,
now I'm going to show you why you're wrong.
For you see my friend,
you can never win.
Because you're not enough to kill me,
not enough to heal me,
and not enough to set me free from me.
You're not enough.
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Re: Not Enough
it's different and i like it even through u sound angery...and a lot of hate but it's good..keep it up.
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It is quite good... wish you luck with your further endevours.
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Thanks for the comments. I should have more soon. I'll transfer some of the ones I have on my other forums to this one.
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pretty dark i must say, lol the poem is awesome, i don't know in what you get inspired to write poems like this because i wanna know. keep it up man.
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that is dark I like it and pm me when you put more would you and keep it up:D
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that is a cool poem, i also like it how you sound really angry at this person but for some reason you have still kept your cool about them.
Great work, can't wait to read more.