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  1. Nov 04, 2007 04:48 AM #1
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    Not a fancy title: But pure love.

    I love you.'
    Don't you ever forget that.

    You are the best girl ever,
    Don't you regret that.

    You are the one girl who makes me feel the familiar: -
    Anticipation, churning of stomach, warmthi get from smiling and holding you

    You are the reason I wake up, I think of you that moment.
    I smile, imagining you in my arms, laying next to me, with your angelic face, those soft, sensitive features of your face.

    You are the reason my heart beats, you are the one I want to be with.
    You are the girl I cry for, you are my angel, Jamie.

    I love you I LOVE you I love YOU.
    I want us to be together.

    I want us to talk about everthing.
    I want us to be able to trust each other.

    I want us to be a perfect couple,
    i don't want the love to ever run out.

    Nor do I want to see you with other as long as I am with you.
    Loyalty, love, compassion, exultance and heaven, is what I experience.

    And I wrote this in two lines it, to signify us two only.
    I hope you find that cute ^_^
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  2. Nov 04, 2007 05:28 AM #2
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    Re: Not a fancy title: But pure love.

    @.@ oooh...someone is terribly in love here... love the flow in this poem... it's a sweet poem..nice way of using words... ^^ keep it up
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  3. Nov 04, 2007 05:53 AM #3
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    Re: Not a fancy title: But pure love.

    beautiful poem! it's cute and i truly feel the love pouring out of this poem^^ i hope those feeling will reach her good job rave

    btw these are my favorite lines

    I want us to talk about everthing.
    I want us to be able to trust each other.

    I want us to be a perfect couple,
    i don't want the love to ever run out.

    Nor do I want to see you with other as long as I am with you.
    Loyalty, love, compassion, exultance and heaven, is what I experience.

    amazing job again
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    Re: Not a fancy title: But pure love.

    wow. congrats. on your new love. cute poem.
    ayayyayaaayya

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    Re: Not a fancy title: But pure love.

    A lovely poem. Nicely written and it just flows smoothly. Keep it up! =D
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    Re: Not a fancy title: But pure love.

    *wipes away tears*

    You just wrote what I've been thinking for ten whole months now! I love this poem. You are good at expressing your emotions, I like that alot. This poem just said everything that's been on my mind, everything I've told to my special someone. You just inspired me to write more today--even though I kinda ran out of ideas. Thank you!

    Great work on this poem! I hope to read more of your work (just don't make me cry anymore, LOL.)

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    Re: Not a fancy title: But pure love.

    Thats soo sweet cute too! I love the first lines ,keep up the good work! I cant wait to see more!
    I tryed to see things from your point of view but i cant seem to get my head that far up my ass!
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    Re: Not a fancy title: But pure love.

    I hope she doesn't...

    Aww... that's so sweet ^-^

    o.o wow.. she must be special to you

    -sighs- that's so romantic...

    ^_^ That's SO sweet and beautiful

    o.o wow you must REALLY love her

    ^_^ talking is great... learn so much about each other and trust is an important part of a relationship... I hope you learn to trust each other.

    nothing is perfect but you can get close, good luck. ^_^

    -.- jeez... talk about being a hoe...

    I think it's cute....
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