Not in the mood

*Lasura* · Jul 10, 2007, 11:03 AM

I’m really not in the mood...
Not in the mood to do ANYTHING...
I take a look at the forums and they seem boring
I open the poem section but can’t find my place there…
I talk to friends but the conversations seem empty…
I try to make a sig… but somehow it seems too difficult
I open my story but I can’t continue it…
Even the music seems too boring…
The sun shines too bright…
The birds sing too loud…

I’m just not in the mood…
Why am I crying!? There is no reason…
You haven’t done anything, still yes, you are to blame...
Maybe because I’ve missed you too much…
Maybe because I hate that you’re now so far away…
I need to talk to you…
But you’re not here…

I’m not in the mood…
To talk, to read, to smile, to create, to write, to listen, to see, to hear, to cry…
I’m not in the mood…

Ahh... just some feelings that had to come out, I'm sure I'll edit it later, but tell me what you think of the starting variant...

KuwiRules145 · Jul 10, 2007, 11:51 AM

I love it!!!!!! IT rules!!!!! I sometimes feel that or maybe all the time!!!!! Your poems rock Lasura!!!!!!!! I hope to see more so YEAH!!!!!!!!!! GO GO GO LASURA!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You RULE!!!!!

BAUTIFULSOUL · Jul 10, 2007, 12:28 PM

that was awesome dont cahnge anything i can actually relate to that poem!!
GOOD JOB!!

halo3master · Jul 10, 2007, 04:59 PM

whoooooooooooohooooooooo im not in the mood to explain why i wrote that but lasura know i love her poem and this one is no exception at all i could use this at school when i dont feel like talking to anyone this poem has pulled me out of my sleepy mood thanks for the poem lasura

*Lasura* · Jul 11, 2007, 02:40 PM

Thank You guys!!! ^^ Sorry for sayig this only now... I just wasn't in the mood yesterday ^^ lol

I don't rulle, Kuwi- you rulle!!! ^^ It's even said in your username lol But thank you for cheering me up... I'm going, I'm going...

Beautifulsoul... thank you very much... and if you say it doesn't need changes... maybe you're right ^^

And thank you halo3master and you're welcomed... You can deffinetely borrow this for school, but you should take the second stranza out... doesn't fit you ^^ oh... and give a lill bit of credit for me, ok? ^^

*atomik_sprout* · Jul 11, 2007, 02:50 PM

Poems with rants are pretty high on my list. It's real talk coming from the heart. I like this poem because it speaks on what's actually happening here on AO. I've only seen maybe one other similar. Very unique--mad props. ^_^

Yippy123 · Jul 11, 2007, 06:05 PM

oh cool poem! i liked it cos it just states that either nothing is going in ur favour or ur just lethargic and cant be bothered with anything except the one u love the most ^^ btw who were u talking about? just curious...

*Lasura* · Jul 11, 2007, 06:16 PM

Ahh... curiosity kills Yippy!!!! ^^ It's about a friend actually, not a lover, though I wished to... long story... I just was really cranky and he made me a lill... well... you see in the poem...
I really appriciate your comment, espeacially it's just one of your few 14, I'm glad I made you come out here ^^

And Thank You Sprout!!!! I'm so glad you like it so much!!!!!!! It just makes me jump around ^^

Yippy123 · Jul 12, 2007, 12:48 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Lasura

Ahh... curiosity kills Yippy!!!! ^^ It's about a friend actually, not a lover, though I wished to... long story... I just was really cranky and he made me a lill... well... you see in the poem...
I really appriciate your comment, espeacially it's just one of your few 14, I'm glad I made you come out here ^^

And Thank You Sprout!!!! I'm so glad you like it so much!!!!!!! It just makes me jump around ^^

Haha! Indeed it does kill but it was hooked

oh twas a friend but u wanted to go further? hmm ive felt like that before but i guess its either the other person doesnt want to or ur just too nervous to say anything! Yep life sucks indeed

Hope u cheer up!

bratling · Jul 12, 2007, 02:57 PM

I liked this one a lot. I know just exactly how you feel. Not the same cause but that same ishy feeling.

*Lasura* · Jul 13, 2007, 05:22 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Yippy123

Haha! Indeed it does kill but it was hooked

oh twas a friend but u wanted to go further? hmm ive felt like that before but i guess its either the other person doesnt want to or ur just too nervous to say anything! Yep life sucks indeed

Hope u cheer up!

Nope, I'm not nervous, it's a really long story, as I said before... and this is what it has come to... this is the ending of that story ^^ But I'm ok ^^ and happy again... I prefer to go easy on things like this...

Quote:

Originally Posted by bratling

I liked this one a lot. I know just exactly how you feel. Not the same cause but that same ishy feeling.

Ahh... not a good feeling... I read it again now and shiver just remembering it... come on!!! I didn't even want to talk to my friends and I couldn't even forget myself in writing or graphic design... it's terrible... hope that doesn't happen again ^^ lol

Jul 10, 2007, 11:03 AM	#1 (permalink)
Lasura Angelic Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: In a Demon's Arms Posts: 1,872 Thanks: 56 Thanked 34 Times in 31 Posts Credits: 49,619	Not in the mood I’m really not in the mood... Not in the mood to do ANYTHING... I take a look at the forums and they seem boring I open the poem section but can’t find my place there… I talk to friends but the conversations seem empty… I try to make a sig… but somehow it seems too difficult I open my story but I can’t continue it… Even the music seems too boring… The sun shines too bright… The birds sing too loud… I’m just not in the mood… Why am I crying!? There is no reason… You haven’t done anything, still yes, you are to blame... Maybe because I’ve missed you too much… Maybe because I hate that you’re now so far away… I need to talk to you… But you’re not here… I’m not in the mood… To talk, to read, to smile, to create, to write, to listen, to see, to hear, to cry… I’m not in the mood… Ahh... just some feelings that had to come out, I'm sure I'll edit it later, but tell me what you think of the starting variant... __________________ My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge
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Jul 10, 2007, 11:51 AM	#2 (permalink)
KuwiRules145 Tournaments Won: 2 ♡♥I love you Kyle Kun!♥♡ Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: In my lovers heart Posts: 963 Thanks: 3 Thanked 24 Times in 16 Posts Credits: 13,226	Re: Not in the mood I love it!!!!!! IT rules!!!!! I sometimes feel that or maybe all the time!!!!! Your poems rock Lasura!!!!!!!! I hope to see more so YEAH!!!!!!!!!! GO GO GO LASURA!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You RULE!!!!! __________________ ♡♥♡♥No matter what I'll always love you for Eternity...I love you Kyle♥♡♥♡ Never let me go... hold me tight and love me like I do ♡♥Anime Life♥♡
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BAUTIFULSOUL Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: ontario, canada Posts: 125 Thanks: 0 Thanked 2 Times in 2 Posts Credits: 2,187	Re: Not in the mood that was awesome dont cahnge anything i can actually relate to that poem!! GOOD JOB!! __________________ IF YOU LISTEN CLOSELY, YOU CAN HEAR MY HEART BEATING FOR YOU. THIS BEAUTIFUL SIG MADE BY LASURA=D
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halo3master Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: covenant homeplanet Posts: 333 Thanks: 1 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 425	Re: Not in the mood whoooooooooooohooooooooo im not in the mood to explain why i wrote that but lasura know i love her poem and this one is no exception at all i could use this at school when i dont feel like talking to anyone this poem has pulled me out of my sleepy mood thanks for the poem lasura __________________
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Lasura Angelic Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: In a Demon's Arms Posts: 1,872 Thanks: 56 Thanked 34 Times in 31 Posts Credits: 49,619	Re: Not in the mood Thank You guys!!! ^^ Sorry for sayig this only now... I just wasn't in the mood yesterday ^^ lol I don't rulle, Kuwi- you rulle!!! ^^ It's even said in your username lol But thank you for cheering me up... I'm going, I'm going... Beautifulsoul... thank you very much... and if you say it doesn't need changes... maybe you're right ^^ And thank you halo3master and you're welcomed... You can deffinetely borrow this for school, but you should take the second stranza out... doesn't fit you ^^ oh... and give a lill bit of credit for me, ok? ^^ __________________ My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge
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atomik_sprout Verbal Vandal Join Date: Dec 2004 Location: Minneapolis, MN Posts: 2,110 Thanks: 62 Thanked 76 Times in 70 Posts Credits: 125,184	Re: Not in the mood Poems with rants are pretty high on my list. It's real talk coming from the heart. I like this poem because it speaks on what's actually happening here on AO. I've only seen maybe one other similar. Very unique--mad props. ^_^ __________________ http://www.myspace.com/boondocksamurai
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Yippy123 Newbie Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: England Posts: 30 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 110	Re: Not in the mood oh cool poem! i liked it cos it just states that either nothing is going in ur favour or ur just lethargic and cant be bothered with anything except the one u love the most ^^ btw who were u talking about? just curious...
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Lasura Angelic Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: In a Demon's Arms Posts: 1,872 Thanks: 56 Thanked 34 Times in 31 Posts Credits: 49,619	Re: Not in the mood Ahh... curiosity kills Yippy!!!! ^^ It's about a friend actually, not a lover, though I wished to... long story... I just was really cranky and he made me a lill... well... you see in the poem... I really appriciate your comment, espeacially it's just one of your few 14, I'm glad I made you come out here ^^ And Thank You Sprout!!!! I'm so glad you like it so much!!!!!!! It just makes me jump around ^^ __________________ My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge
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bratling Sugar sweet poison Join Date: May 2007 Location: Crystal Minnesota. Posts: 516 Thanks: 0 Thanked 23 Times in 22 Posts Credits: 12,880	Re: Not in the mood I liked this one a lot. I know just exactly how you feel. Not the same cause but that same ishy feeling.
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