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    Not in the mood

    I’m really not in the mood...
    Not in the mood to do ANYTHING...
    I take a look at the forums and they seem boring
    I open the poem section but can’t find my place there…
    I talk to friends but the conversations seem empty…
    I try to make a sig… but somehow it seems too difficult
    I open my story but I can’t continue it…
    Even the music seems too boring…
    The sun shines too bright…
    The birds sing too loud…

    I’m just not in the mood…
    Why am I crying!? There is no reason…
    You haven’t done anything, still yes, you are to blame...
    Maybe because I’ve missed you too much…
    Maybe because I hate that you’re now so far away…
    I need to talk to you…
    But you’re not here…

    I’m not in the mood…
    To talk, to read, to smile, to create, to write, to listen, to see, to hear, to cry…
    I’m not in the mood…



    Ahh... just some feelings that had to come out, I'm sure I'll edit it later, but tell me what you think of the starting variant...

    My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge

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    Re: Not in the mood

    I love it!!!!!! IT rules!!!!! I sometimes feel that or maybe all the time!!!!! Your poems rock Lasura!!!!!!!! I hope to see more so YEAH!!!!!!!!!! GO GO GO LASURA!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You RULE!!!!!
    「When I'm sad, I stop being sad and be awesome instead」

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    Re: Not in the mood

    that was awesome dont cahnge anything i can actually relate to that poem!!
    GOOD JOB!!

    IF YOU LISTEN CLOSELY, YOU CAN HEAR MY HEART BEATING FOR YOU.
    THIS BEAUTIFUL SIG MADE BY LASURA=D


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    Re: Not in the mood

    whoooooooooooohooooooooo im not in the mood to explain why i wrote that but lasura know i love her poem and this one is no exception at all i could use this at school when i dont feel like talking to anyone this poem has pulled me out of my sleepy mood thanks for the poem lasura

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    Re: Not in the mood

    Thank You guys!!! ^^ Sorry for sayig this only now... I just wasn't in the mood yesterday ^^ lol

    I don't rulle, Kuwi- you rulle!!! ^^ It's even said in your username lol But thank you for cheering me up... I'm going, I'm going...

    Beautifulsoul... thank you very much... and if you say it doesn't need changes... maybe you're right ^^

    And thank you halo3master and you're welcomed... You can deffinetely borrow this for school, but you should take the second stranza out... doesn't fit you ^^ oh... and give a lill bit of credit for me, ok? ^^

    My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge

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    Re: Not in the mood

    Poems with rants are pretty high on my list. It's real talk coming from the heart. I like this poem because it speaks on what's actually happening here on AO. I've only seen maybe one other similar. Very unique--mad props. ^_^


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    Re: Not in the mood

    oh cool poem! i liked it cos it just states that either nothing is going in ur favour or ur just lethargic and cant be bothered with anything except the one u love the most ^^ btw who were u talking about? just curious...

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    Re: Not in the mood

    Ahh... curiosity kills Yippy!!!! ^^ It's about a friend actually, not a lover, though I wished to... long story... I just was really cranky and he made me a lill... well... you see in the poem...
    I really appriciate your comment, espeacially it's just one of your few 14, I'm glad I made you come out here ^^

    And Thank You Sprout!!!! I'm so glad you like it so much!!!!!!! It just makes me jump around ^^

    My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge

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