short but sweet,
but sounds creepy.
I'm a little psyco hear me shout,
here is my arm and here is my knife.
Once you here me shout,
don't you come or I'll have to cut you too.
Once I'm done,
I'll cut you up into small pieces,
and throw them out.
Short and sweet,
but sounds creepy.
hello flaminghate,
I am happy I remembered your username. I remember once I thought it was flamingheart and you said you would never have picked a name like that. This is your friend from the summer. I didn't get a chance to say goodbye or even get your email address, so in an attempt to say hello I now have an animeonline account. Send me an email, [email protected], I would love to hear how school is going for you.
Mm, not a bad poem. I find it kind of short. To improve, try adding more description to your poem. Overall, it's okay. Keep up the good work.
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