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I'm not stupid
I know what type of guy is wrong or right
But when I look at him
All those notions take flight
Something about his voice
And the way that he talks
All cocky and arrogant
The same as his walk
Just looking at him
A sigh escapes me
So tough, truly bad
But his type stays free
I could tell from the start
He will never be THE ONE
But why pass this up...
It’s just a little fun
This is a nice little poem and a catchy title! Keep up the good work kimifemi and I'm looking forward to reading more poems from you in the future!
Hey thanks! =)Quote:
Originally Posted by BlueFox1
lol Ok this is gonna sound stupid
but everytime I read the title
I think about that old T.V. show
the one about a dinosuar family
and whenever someone tried to babysit or talk to the baby dinosuar
he would hit them (mainly the father lol)
and say "not the mama"
lol! don't know why but it gets me everytime lol just had to say that
What's funny about that is I remember that show!!! lol! I never thought of it like that but it is funny to see the title knowing that! lol! Either way you still did a great job with the poem! End rhyme is not my style I do more free verse poems, but no one really reads them!lol!Quote:
Originally Posted by KimiFemi
I can relate to this peom...I even wrote a peom for a guy I thought was the one, but who broke my heart...it's called "Thoughts of Suicide"...Quote:
Originally Posted by KimiFemi
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Originally Posted by BlueFox1
Lol!!
you remember it!!
haha I was sure you wouldn't know what I was talking about!
that show was the best =P
thanks =D
:eek: :(: I haven't read one of yours yet I don't think
but I have excusses!!!! lol wanna hear 'em?
no? lol well I tried =P
I prefer to write my poems so they rhyme
It's easier :eek: lol yeah I know thats bad =P
but free verse poems are usually very "deep"
and I don't know about that ...
if I tried it they would just turn out to be sentences and not poetry ...
lol so I stick with safe stuff
Yeah ... I was going for that whole " why good girls go for bad guys" vibeQuote:
Originally Posted by May_Bloodrose_Pagan
and some of us know what we're getting into and some don't
but they never really end up the way you want =P
So I'm looking for good guys who can pretend to be bad! hahaha! j/k :D:
excellent! i loved this poem.... though im glad its not about me! mahahahah
im not arrogant.....smiles*
anyhow its good to see more by you! you always keep it true.
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Originally Posted by god of death
lol! it's not really about anyone actually I juist wanted to give a lil feel for what I would be thinking in that situation lol make sense? idk oh well=P