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    Not the one

    I'm not stupid
    I know what type of guy is wrong or right
    But when I look at him
    All those notions take flight

    Something about his voice
    And the way that he talks
    All cocky and arrogant
    The same as his walk

    Just looking at him
    A sigh escapes me
    So tough, truly bad
    But his type stays free

    I could tell from the start
    He will never be THE ONE
    But why pass this up...
    It’s just a little fun

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    Re: Not the one

    This is a nice little poem and a catchy title! Keep up the good work kimifemi and I'm looking forward to reading more poems from you in the future!

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    Quote Originally Posted by BlueFox1 View Post
    This is a nice little poem and a catchy title! Keep up the good work kimifemi and I'm looking forward to reading more poems from you in the future!
    Hey thanks! =)
    lol Ok this is gonna sound stupid
    but everytime I read the title
    I think about that old T.V. show
    the one about a dinosuar family
    and whenever someone tried to babysit or talk to the baby dinosuar
    he would hit them (mainly the father lol)
    and say "not the mama"
    lol! don't know why but it gets me everytime lol just had to say that

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    Quote Originally Posted by KimiFemi View Post

    Hey thanks! =)
    lol Ok this is gonna sound stupid
    but everytime I read the title
    I think about that old T.V. show
    the one about a dinosuar family
    and whenever someone tried to babysit or talk to the baby dinosuar
    he would hit them (mainly the father lol)
    and say "not the mama"
    lol! don't know why but it gets me everytime lol just had to say that
    What's funny about that is I remember that show!!! lol! I never thought of it like that but it is funny to see the title knowing that! lol! Either way you still did a great job with the poem! End rhyme is not my style I do more free verse poems, but no one really reads them!lol!

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    Re: Not the one

    Quote Originally Posted by KimiFemi View Post
    I'm not stupid
    I know what type of guy is wrong or right
    But when I look at him
    All those notions take flight

    Something about his voice
    And the way that he talks
    All cocky and arrogant
    The same as his walk

    Just looking at him
    A sigh escapes me
    So tough, truly bad
    But his type stays free

    I could tell from the start
    He will never be THE ONE
    But why pass this up...
    It’s just a little fun
    I can relate to this peom...I even wrote a peom for a guy I thought was the one, but who broke my heart...it's called "Thoughts of Suicide"...

    Very Deeply Misunderstood

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    Quote Originally Posted by BlueFox1 View Post
    What's funny about that is I remember that show!!! lol! I never thought of it like that but it is funny to see the title knowing that! lol! Either way you still did a great job with the poem! End rhyme is not my style I do more free verse poems, but no one really reads them!lol!

    Lol!!
    you remember it!!
    haha I was sure you wouldn't know what I was talking about!
    that show was the best =P
    thanks =D
    I haven't read one of yours yet I don't think
    but I have excusses!!!! lol wanna hear 'em?
    no? lol well I tried =P
    I prefer to write my poems so they rhyme
    It's easier lol yeah I know thats bad =P
    but free verse poems are usually very "deep"
    and I don't know about that ...
    if I tried it they would just turn out to be sentences and not poetry ...
    lol so I stick with safe stuff



    Quote Originally Posted by May_Bloodrose_Pagan View Post
    I can relate to this peom...I even wrote a peom for a guy I thought was the one, but who broke my heart...it's called "Thoughts of Suicide"...
    Yeah ... I was going for that whole " why good girls go for bad guys" vibe
    and some of us know what we're getting into and some don't
    but they never really end up the way you want =P
    So I'm looking for good guys who can pretend to be bad! hahaha! j/k

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    Re: Not the one

    excellent! i loved this poem.... though im glad its not about me! mahahahah
    im not arrogant.....smiles*
    anyhow its good to see more by you! you always keep it true.
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    Quote Originally Posted by god of death View Post
    excellent! i loved this poem.... though im glad its not about me! mahahahah
    im not arrogant.....smiles*
    anyhow its good to see more by you! you always keep it true.
    lol! it's not really about anyone actually I juist wanted to give a lil feel for what I would be thinking in that situation lol make sense? idk oh well=P

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