+ Reply to Thread
Results 1 to 2 of 2

Thread: Not so far away, for now... ((Re-post))

  1. #1
    Newbie .:G l o o m y:. may be famous one day .:G l o o m y:. may be famous one day .:G l o o m y:.'s Avatar
    Join Date
    Jul 2005
    Location
    Florida
    Posts
    30
    Thanks
    0
    Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts

    Exclamation Not so far away, for now... ((Re-post))

    It's not so pleasent being alone.
    No one ever knew, how lost I felt.
    Or even how alone I was.
    I hate to sound harsh, but that's just me.
    It was hard to find words to speak of you.
    I watched you from afar without your knowledge.
    I watched your poster, your movements.
    Did you know I exsisted?
    Please don't leave, what will I watch?
    Your pulling my own trigger and this is screaming distraction.

    You made me sweat.
    I think of what you did and I secretly loved it.
    Dancing between boys and girls; where were you when my shock set in?
    Left in the distance you wondered.
    Left alone as I was.
    I'm seated and i'm sweating, help me out.
    I'm exactly where you like me you know, but I can't seem to find you.
    I'm afraid that I never evn had you in my grasp.

    You weren't even unappealing.
    What a wonderful character of intimacy you were.
    The virgin I was though, I stayed.
    Where were you, I still felt lost,
    Shame, that you felt the same.
    We could be so much more.

    Girls in whit dresses, boys in dark suits, but we were left out.
    We were making some progress when I found you by the door drifting away.
    You smelled of the plant and whiskey but still so beautiful you were.
    And I believ it was time for a new and proper introduction.
    You shall not stray away this time; I was desperate for attention.
    We are still young; dance you will with I.
    If you talk you better walk towards the dance floor.

    It's time for us to take a chance.
    Make a scene, make a scene.
    No one can proof a single word we said.
    You are only so clever to a certain extent.
    Finally near the end, stay with me.
    This was no accident, this was a certain wonderful chain of events.
    Together for now, untill, I stray away as you did.


    Please comment! I need feedback!
    "Quit the touchy, feely, self-help, yoga crap!"

  2. #2
    You's Trollin Pro Leafblower Champion, Helicopter Champion ketaro is making a name for themselves ketaro is making a name for themselves ketaro's Avatar
    Join Date
    Apr 2005
    Posts
    4,293
    Thanks
    30
    Thanked 38 Times in 36 Posts

    Re: Not so far away, for now... ((Re-post))

    Another yet the most kool poems of all, the message was clear in this poem, nice job gloomy, keep it up.

+ Reply to Thread

Similar Threads

  1. The 25,000 posts thread!
    By jaderabbit in forum The Million Post Forum
    Replies: 24563
    Last Post: Apr 24, 2006, 09:26 PM
  2. New post issue
    By Ectoruss in forum The Thread Vault
    Replies: 3
    Last Post: May 11, 2005, 11:08 PM

Bookmarks

Posting Permissions

  • You may not post new threads
  • You may not post replies
  • You may not post attachments
  • You may not edit your posts