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    Once when I was a young girl.
    My mother told me she wouldn’t be around forever.
    I was confused.
    Didn’t know what she had meant.
    Till now
    She gone
    Gone from my life
    She’s not going to be there to see her grandchildren grow up.
    And shes not going to be there for when I need her
    And when her newest grandchild comes to the world.
    I’m due in 1 month
    If so hard to dele with the stress that my mother.
    the woman that gave me life.
    isn’t going to be here to see what she gave life for.

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    ooo! This is so sad. but its is so good, I think this is one your best work. ^__^ good job. 10/10


    Thanks lifeforce! (:

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    AWWWWWWWWWWWWW its soooooooo sweet and sad but good 10/10
    I got no idea what to say

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    thank you for your class comments ^___^
    and yeah fma1012 i think this is my best work too hehe >//< haha

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    Re: not there no more

    That's well written Lizzy ^_^ Some minor thing, but yea your right one of your best poems.

    A bite sad, but meaningful.
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    Jacob Black, Breaking Dawn, Chapter 14, p.271
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    This is a really sad poem! You did a good job putting this into words. Keep up the good work and I'm looking forward to more of you work equinn!

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    hehe thank you soo much for all your comments ^__^

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    Re: not there no more

    that was heart warming and touching......... i loved it and keep it up

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