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Reply With Quoteooo! This is so sad.but its is so good, I think this is one your best work. ^__^ good job. 10/10
Once when I was a young girl.
My mother told me she wouldn’t be around forever.
I was confused.
Didn’t know what she had meant.
Till now
She gone
Gone from my life
She’s not going to be there to see her grandchildren grow up.
And shes not going to be there for when I need her
And when her newest grandchild comes to the world.
I’m due in 1 month
If so hard to dele with the stress that my mother.
the woman that gave me life.
isn’t going to be here to see what she gave life for.
ooo! This is so sad.
Thanks lifeforce! (:
Re: not there no more AWWWWWWWWWWWWW its soooooooo sweetand sad
I got no idea what to say
thank you for your class comments ^___^
and yeah fma1012 i think this is my best work too hehe >//< haha
That's well written Lizzy ^_^ Some minor thing, but yea your right one of your best poems.
A bite sad, but meaningful.
This is a really sad poem! You did a good job putting this into words. Keep up the good work and I'm looking forward to more of you work equinn!
hehe thank you soo much for all your comments ^__^
that was heart warming and touching......... i loved it and keep it up
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