not there no more

*equinn* · Jan 13, 2007, 11:31 AM

Once when I was a young girl.
My mother told me she wouldn’t be around forever.
I was confused.
Didn’t know what she had meant.
Till now
She gone
Gone from my life
She’s not going to be there to see her grandchildren grow up.
And shes not going to be there for when I need her
And when her newest grandchild comes to the world.
I’m due in 1 month
If so hard to dele with the stress that my mother.
the woman that gave me life.
isn’t going to be here to see what she gave life for.

fma1012 · Jan 13, 2007, 11:36 AM

ooo! This is so sad.

but its is so good, I think this is one your best work. ^__^ good job. 10/10

Dasike · Jan 13, 2007, 12:11 PM

AWWWWWWWWWWWWW its soooooooo sweet

and sad

but good 10/10

*equinn* · Jan 14, 2007, 07:09 AM

thank you for your class comments ^___^
and yeah fma1012 i think this is my best work too hehe >//< haha

*Mr. K* · Jan 14, 2007, 08:12 AM

That's well written Lizzy ^_^ Some minor thing, but yea your right one of your best poems.

A bite sad, but meaningful.

*BlueFox1* · Jan 16, 2007, 04:02 AM

This is a really sad poem! You did a good job putting this into words. Keep up the good work and I'm looking forward to more of you work equinn!

*equinn* · Jan 16, 2007, 01:20 PM

hehe thank you soo much for all your comments ^__^

West_King · Jan 17, 2007, 07:30 AM

that was heart warming and touching......... i loved it and keep it up

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equinn Ao's official cat girl~★ Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: Emerald island (Eire) (Ireland) Posts: 1,681 Thanks: 11 Thanked 30 Times in 28 Posts Credits: 19,781	not there no more Once when I was a young girl. My mother told me she wouldn’t be around forever. I was confused. Didn’t know what she had meant. Till now She gone Gone from my life She’s not going to be there to see her grandchildren grow up. And shes not going to be there for when I need her And when her newest grandchild comes to the world. I’m due in 1 month If so hard to dele with the stress that my mother. the woman that gave me life. isn’t going to be here to see what she gave life for. __________________ Lizzie + Phil together for 8 months! and to be longer! WOOP! http://neko-panda.deviantart.com/
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Jan 13, 2007, 11:36 AM	#2 (permalink)
fma1012 Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: somewhere Posts: 470 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 2,023	Re: not there no more ooo! This is so sad. but its is so good, I think this is one your best work. ^__^ good job. 10/10 __________________ ThAnKs CaNdId FoR ThE SwEet SiG~
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Dasike Newbie Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: Ireland Posts: 88 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 810	Re: not there no more AWWWWWWWWWWWWW its soooooooo sweet and sad but good 10/10 __________________ Thanks to Aiora for my great siggy ^.^ Back from hell with the Ghosts
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equinn Ao's official cat girl~★ Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: Emerald island (Eire) (Ireland) Posts: 1,681 Thanks: 11 Thanked 30 Times in 28 Posts Credits: 19,781	Re: not there no more thank you for your class comments ^___^ and yeah fma1012 i think this is my best work too hehe >//< haha __________________ Lizzie + Phil together for 8 months! and to be longer! WOOP! http://neko-panda.deviantart.com/
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Mr. K THUMBSUCKING ADDICTION Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: Alaska Posts: 1,269 Thanks: 0 Thanked 2 Times in 2 Posts Credits: 3,586	Re: not there no more That's well written Lizzy ^_^ Some minor thing, but yea your right one of your best poems. A bite sad, but meaningful. __________________ ≥°≤ [?] █▓▒░░▒▓█ [?] ≥°≤ ◕ ◡ ◕;;;;[?]
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Jan 16, 2007, 04:02 AM	#6 (permalink)
BlueFox1 Devoted Otaku Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: A place called Midnight Sun know as Tranquility Posts: 584 Thanks: 8 Thanked 6 Times in 6 Posts Credits: 1,286	Re: not there no more This is a really sad poem! You did a good job putting this into words. Keep up the good work and I'm looking forward to more of you work equinn! __________________
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equinn Ao's official cat girl~★ Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: Emerald island (Eire) (Ireland) Posts: 1,681 Thanks: 11 Thanked 30 Times in 28 Posts Credits: 19,781	Re: not there no more hehe thank you soo much for all your comments ^__^ __________________ Lizzie + Phil together for 8 months! and to be longer! WOOP! http://neko-panda.deviantart.com/
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