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![]() ![]() Credits: 19,781 | not there no more Once when I was a young girl. My mother told me she wouldn’t be around forever. I was confused. Didn’t know what she had meant. Till now She gone Gone from my life She’s not going to be there to see her grandchildren grow up. And shes not going to be there for when I need her And when her newest grandchild comes to the world. I’m due in 1 month If so hard to dele with the stress that my mother. the woman that gave me life. isn’t going to be here to see what she gave life for.
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![]() ![]() Credits: 2,023 | Re: not there no more ooo! This is so sad. but its is so good, I think this is one your best work. ^__^ good job. 10/10
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![]() ![]() Credits: 19,781 | Re: not there no more thank you for your class comments ^___^ and yeah fma1012 i think this is my best work too hehe >//< haha
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![]() ![]() Credits: 3,586 | Re: not there no more That's well written Lizzy ^_^ Some minor thing, but yea your right one of your best poems. A bite sad, but meaningful. |
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![]() ![]() Credits: 1,286 | Re: not there no more This is a really sad poem! You did a good job putting this into words. Keep up the good work and I'm looking forward to more of you work equinn!
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![]() ![]() Credits: 19,781 | Re: not there no more hehe thank you soo much for all your comments ^__^
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