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Old Jul 15, 2007, 05:52 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Nothing...

Nothing... that’s what I am...
Not even worth for a memory,
Not worth enough to say it was right to try...
For you, I’m nothing...

Heartless... that’s how you are to me…
Too high to look back and smile,
Too high to admit you liked to be with me…
For me, you’re heartless!

Forgotten... that’s the word for me…
Why do you make me feel like no one cares about me?
Why do I have to lay and cry here- alone, never free?
For the world, I’m forgotten!!!

Tired... yes I’m tired too now...
Tired of pretending it will be alright...
Tired of trying to make you smile while my hear breaks.
Tired! So tired of this world!!!

Leave me!!! I scream through my tears...
What an idiot you are to really do so...
Now all these feeling make me bleed...
All these thoughts are too much to sleep...

* My 900th post...
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Old Jul 15, 2007, 06:07 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Re: Nothing...

Congrats on post 900!
This poem really hit me... I often feel like an expert at feeling like I'm worthless to people... and feeling like I've been forgotten.
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Old Jul 16, 2007, 05:17 AM   #3 (permalink)
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Re: Nothing...

hey great poem laura and like peach said i too feel unwanted sometimes i think everyone does at some point in their life anyway love the poem post more
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Old Jul 16, 2007, 05:22 AM   #4 (permalink)
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Re: Nothing...

Well thank You guys... I'm glad you like this poem and it's also good to know I'm not the only one who feels like this sometimes... Sometimes I really get tired of being happy...lol

And I post all the poems I write- I just don't write them so much... I'm more of a story writer after all...
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Old Jul 16, 2007, 09:15 AM   #5 (permalink)
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Oh my laura @.@ a lot of *gulps* sheesh @.@ no wonder my friends say not to piss of a girl... just look at that~! Superbly done~! ^^
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Old Jul 16, 2007, 12:28 PM   #6 (permalink)
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Re: Nothing...

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Nothing... that’s what I am...
Not even worth for a memory,
Not worth enough to say it was right to try...
For you, I’m nothing...

Heartless... that’s how you are to me…
Too high to look back and smile,
Too high to admit you liked to be with me…
For me, you’re heartless!

Forgotten... that’s the word for me…
Why do you make me feel like no one cares about me?
Why do I have to lay and cry here- alone, never free?
For the world, I’m forgotten!!!

Tired... yes I’m tired too now...
Tired of pretending it will be alright...
Tired of trying to make you smile while my hear breaks.
Tired! So tired of this world!!!

Leave me!!! I scream through my tears...
What an idiot you are to really do so...
Now all these feeling make me bleed...
All these thoughts are too much to sleep...

* My 900th post...
First of all: Congrats on hitting over 900 posts! ^_^

Second, I'd like to say that I really like this poem. Such emotions--anger and pain--run through the lines of text. It made me a little sad just reading it. I hope everything's going okay for you, and good job!
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Old Jul 16, 2007, 09:42 PM   #7 (permalink)
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Re: Nothing...

siffl sniffl*wipes tear away*beautiful great work yours are way better than yours are way more serious my are just funny 5 out 5 here
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Old Jul 19, 2007, 04:47 AM   #8 (permalink)
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Re: Nothing...

Thank You very much Ray! And yes- you shouldn't piss of a girl... girls can become scaaary... ^^

Thank You Sprout!!! It's very nice to hear that I have managed to really put down these feelings in words... Well... actually- if I write I'm never ok... but it's just a part of life...

And thank You halo3master! ^^ and 5/5!!!!!! Thank You *bows* Well, yes mine are a lot more serious, but I find them less enjoyable just because of this reason- they're all the same in some way...
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Old Jul 19, 2007, 11:51 AM   #9 (permalink)
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Re: Nothing...

That's one way of telling someone how you feel...and how you think that they feel... ^^ i like it! it's great!!!!
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Old Jul 19, 2007, 12:17 PM   #10 (permalink)
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Re: Nothing...

I love that poem. such emotion. it was great.
oh and congrats on your 900th post
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Old Jul 19, 2007, 12:21 PM   #11 (permalink)
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Re: Nothing...

It absolutely sucks to feel forgotten, or lost, or unwanted. And this poem conveyed that perfectly. I hate feeling inadiquite no matter what I do. But for some people, no matter what, it's not good enough. Because they're not happy with themselves. Or sometimes people just don't line up right, not because there is anything wrong with either one of them. Some things just don't fit.
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