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    Nothing...

    Nothing... that’s what I am...
    Not even worth for a memory,
    Not worth enough to say it was right to try...
    For you, I’m nothing...

    Heartless... that’s how you are to me…
    Too high to look back and smile,
    Too high to admit you liked to be with me…
    For me, you’re heartless!

    Forgotten... that’s the word for me…
    Why do you make me feel like no one cares about me?
    Why do I have to lay and cry here- alone, never free?
    For the world, I’m forgotten!!!

    Tired... yes I’m tired too now...
    Tired of pretending it will be alright...
    Tired of trying to make you smile while my hear breaks.
    Tired! So tired of this world!!!

    Leave me!!! I scream through my tears...
    What an idiot you are to really do so...
    Now all these feeling make me bleed...
    All these thoughts are too much to sleep...

    * My 900th post...

    My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge

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    Re: Nothing...

    Congrats on post 900!
    This poem really hit me... I often feel like an expert at feeling like I'm worthless to people... and feeling like I've been forgotten.
    ... Not Ever Again...

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    Re: Nothing...

    hey great poem laura and like peach said i too feel unwanted sometimes i think everyone does at some point in their life anyway love the poem post more



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    Re: Nothing...

    Well thank You guys... I'm glad you like this poem and it's also good to know I'm not the only one who feels like this sometimes... Sometimes I really get tired of being happy...lol

    And I post all the poems I write- I just don't write them so much... I'm more of a story writer after all...

    My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge

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    Oh my laura @.@ a lot of *gulps* sheesh @.@ no wonder my friends say not to piss of a girl... just look at that~! Superbly done~! ^^

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    Re: Nothing...

    Quote Originally Posted by Lasura View Post
    Nothing... that’s what I am...
    Not even worth for a memory,
    Not worth enough to say it was right to try...
    For you, I’m nothing...

    Heartless... that’s how you are to me…
    Too high to look back and smile,
    Too high to admit you liked to be with me…
    For me, you’re heartless!

    Forgotten... that’s the word for me…
    Why do you make me feel like no one cares about me?
    Why do I have to lay and cry here- alone, never free?
    For the world, I’m forgotten!!!

    Tired... yes I’m tired too now...
    Tired of pretending it will be alright...
    Tired of trying to make you smile while my hear breaks.
    Tired! So tired of this world!!!

    Leave me!!! I scream through my tears...
    What an idiot you are to really do so...
    Now all these feeling make me bleed...
    All these thoughts are too much to sleep...

    * My 900th post...
    First of all: Congrats on hitting over 900 posts! ^_^

    Second, I'd like to say that I really like this poem. Such emotions--anger and pain--run through the lines of text. It made me a little sad just reading it. I hope everything's going okay for you, and good job!


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    Re: Nothing...

    siffl sniffl*wipes tear away*beautiful great work yours are way better than yours are way more serious my are just funny 5 out 5 here

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    Re: Nothing...

    Thank You very much Ray! And yes- you shouldn't piss of a girl... girls can become scaaary... ^^

    Thank You Sprout!!! It's very nice to hear that I have managed to really put down these feelings in words... Well... actually- if I write I'm never ok... but it's just a part of life...

    And thank You halo3master! ^^ and 5/5!!!!!! Thank You *bows* Well, yes mine are a lot more serious, but I find them less enjoyable just because of this reason- they're all the same in some way...

    My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge

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