Peach_follows

Nothing happend.. I swear!
He's still all wrapped up in that girl over there.

Yeah, we took it there. But thats nothing revealing.
Its not about what you do, its about how you're feeling.

You're the only who'd hang out all weekend, just me and you.
You're the who makes me feel that what you say is true.

We've kissed, we've cuddled, we've had our good times.
Perhaps theres a reason why weve never crossed the line.

So just because me and SOMEONE else took it there.
Doisn't mean he cares... nothing happened I swear!

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Lasura

Hmm... a very interresting, quite strange and terribly cool poem!!!! i really enjoyed reading it... it has something so charming in it... I truly love the way you've written this one.. it's shorter than your usual ones but it doesn't lose the deep meaning your poem have... very cool

I truly enjoyed reading this... a great work here!

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My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge

BAUTIFULSOUL

thats a nice poem i really liked it. it's cool and different at the same time and its kinda true in some ways.

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IF YOU LISTEN CLOSELY, YOU CAN HEAR MY HEART BEATING FOR YOU.
THIS BEAUTIFUL SIG MADE BY LASURA=D

Peach_follows

I wasnt sure if anyone would comment on this. Sometimes I just write things that pop off the top of my head. I admit... I liked it too, But only because I had fun writing it. I have no clue how weather or not its quality poetry.

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