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    Nothings all rite

    Do people notice?

    Do You notice?

    Why don't you notice? Do you choose not to? Or is it that you are afraid to like me? Don't listen to what they say. That was the past, it may be true but it is no more.

    Do you really beleve what they say? Do you or not?! Why won't you answer? I'm talking to YOU! You anwer when I Am talking to you! You hear me!

    Why?... Why?...

    Nothing will ever be the same. No...Nothings all rite! Nothing will ever be rite! Do not ever ask me that question again! Nothing will be the same...

    Nothing will ever be all rite...

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    Re: Nothings all rite

    ???????????????????????????

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    Re: Nothings all rite

    hmmm u sound very angery and unhappy in this poem and this person is caseing u great pain...but it's a very good poem if i may say so.
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    I will fight until i find what i'm looking for...you can not judge me on my apperence I am a Warrior. If you have a problem with me..... then my blades will meet your neck.

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    Re: Nothings all rite

    okay here's a tip. Try to put it in the normal standard poem structure. Then i think ppl might understand alil better. Anyways i understand it, its like u notice ppl arent noticing something. Anyway try to restructure it

    Thanks for the siggy Ky-lyrra

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