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    Now it's MY turn!

    I want you to leave.
    Leave me alone.
    Can't you understand?

    That I want my damn peace.
    So just let me be.
    You're not part of the plan.

    I'm better off without you.
    I wish you'd dissapear.
    That would make me so glad.

    You had your chances,
    You made it so clear
    That you didn't want it that bad.

    For if you did, you'd
    Give me some time.
    Let me think a while.

    But you f***** it up,
    You couldn't resist
    Stalking me for a while.

    You claim you
    Don't know Who I am,
    Or who I have become.

    It's not your business
    In the first place!
    Don't be so f***** dumb!

    You put me through
    Hell for two and a half years.
    And now time is up.

    Now it's my turn
    To give you tears,
    And f*** your peace up.


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    Re: Now it's MY turn!

    Wow thats a bit crazy! It gives insanity in this poem thats so amazing about it! I do hope to see more!
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    Re: Now it's MY turn!

    This sounded like the 2nd part of your latest poem. Tho I would rather see it rhyme, as it did in the last, it shows anger, annoyance once more that you see in the person. Won't say your best because it sounded somewhat like your previous.

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    Re: Now it's MY turn!

    Quote Originally Posted by elie26 View Post
    This sounded like the 2nd part of your latest poem. Tho I would rather see it rhyme, as it did in the last, it shows anger, annoyance once more that you see in the person. Won't say your best because it sounded somewhat like your previous.
    Yeah, it did sound like my last poem, but I was kinda blocked, so I just kinda recycled a couple of ideas. Although, I don't understand why you think that this poem doesn't rhyme. ^_^

    Anywho, thanks for your comments, I appreciate it.


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