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Circles have ends , lives
always have finality good
or bad , love will find a
resting spot to never move again.

strange how things just keep changing
yet they stay the same no matter what we do
like finding love its a new experience every time
but the feelings stay the same that will always
be true , but thats not the key to the cirlcle.

The circle will loopp short or long depending on
how the circle is drawn and how stright that
line on the circle is and once you draw the circle just
the way you want it andf not the way you see it ,
if you get what i mean there it will be easier
for you.

very awesome poem i love this one a lot

I like the use of circle in here... but i kinda don't understand what u said holder xD

Hmm... it's nicely done but the atmosphere to it is a bit dull.. :/ hm...sounds like giving up or something near it... though u say u wont stop ^^ lol... hmm maybe all that climbing made u tired good job.. be happy to read more of urs.. keep on writing ^^

I hope the life circle off a person will always end, if it did'nt i would be borring being alive when you've tryed everything.....

A very good poem, with a very good point Peach...... Good job

Nice... very nice... shows the reality of life- some things are bound to happen to you, there are some things you can't escape, some things repeat as the time goes... Especially if it's about relationship... A relationship starts and it will deffinetely end sometime... you'll be lucky if it ends by death of old age... but it ends.

I liked it, you showed that you aint going to give up and tell others that there must be a way to get out of the circle... and that is just what I needed right now ^^

A very nice work Peach...