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    ---o---0---O

    The circle.
    It only gets bigger.

    I find myself almost exactly where I was 10 years ago.

    Different people.
    Different roles.
    But the same feeling.

    The trauma, the dramatic sickness.
    The need to escape.

    And my wishing star.
    My beautiful dream.
    My vision of perfection.
    Whom I admire from so far away.

    I close my eyes, and I can see a future with him.

    But the circle haunts me.
    The threat, it taunts me.
    Old beauty turned ugly.
    Will it happen again?

    I climb outside this circle.
    I'll climb until I am on top.
    And I will stop.

    I will stop the gears form turning.
    I will keep my fire burning.

    Can a circle ever find its end???

    I see myself 10 years from now....
    ... Not Ever Again...

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    Re: ---o---0---O

    Circles have ends , lives
    always have finality good
    or bad , love will find a
    resting spot to never move again.

    strange how things just keep changing
    yet they stay the same no matter what we do
    like finding love its a new experience every time
    but the feelings stay the same that will always
    be true , but thats not the key to the cirlcle.

    The circle will loopp short or long depending on
    how the circle is drawn and how stright that
    line on the circle is and once you draw the circle just
    the way you want it andf not the way you see it ,
    if you get what i mean there it will be easier
    for you.

    very awesome poem i love this one a lot
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: ---o---0---O

    I like the use of circle in here... but i kinda don't understand what u said holder xD

    Hmm... it's nicely done but the atmosphere to it is a bit dull.. :/ hm...sounds like giving up or something near it... though u say u wont stop ^^ lol... hmm maybe all that climbing made u tired good job.. be happy to read more of urs.. keep on writing ^^

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    Re: ---o---0---O

    I hope the life circle off a person will always end, if it did'nt i would be borring being alive when you've tryed everything.....

    A very good poem, with a very good point Peach...... Good job

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    Re: ---o---0---O

    Nice... very nice... shows the reality of life- some things are bound to happen to you, there are some things you can't escape, some things repeat as the time goes... Especially if it's about relationship... A relationship starts and it will deffinetely end sometime... you'll be lucky if it ends by death of old age... but it ends.

    I liked it, you showed that you aint going to give up and tell others that there must be a way to get out of the circle... and that is just what I needed right now ^^

    A very nice work Peach...

    My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge

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