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    O Beautiful Night

    O Beautiful Night

    O beautiful night!
    The mist brushed against my cheek,
    The moon piercing the darkness,
    That alighted the figure before me,
    Its shadow joined mine as we embraced.

    O beautiful night!
    His breath against my neck,
    His lips against my skin,
    His hand tangling in my hair,

    O beautiful night!
    That beautiful night in which I dream,
    In which I long for,
    Tears form in my eyes,

    O beautiful night,
    A gift yet a curse,
    I ask thee, “Will thou darkness swallow me?...,
    “What of my deathbed?”
    A life that has no meaning?
    No care if life? if death?

    O beautiful night,
    I taste thy breath,
    I feel thy touch,
    Thy white eye that sees me,
    I am held within thy grasp; no escape,

    O beautiful night,
    That blade no longer held against me,
    That serpent that seeped into my soul,
    That bright angel!
    I smile and embrace,
    O sweet night, I love thee!
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    My lover speaks; and he says, 'Arise my beloved my beautiful one and come!' -Song of Songs 2:10

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    Re: O Beautiful Night

    this is just beautiful...the use of shakespearian language is really good here...a poem of love...definitely feels like it was written in Shakespears' time. keep it up rk

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