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    Oblivious Solitude

    A night of solitude
    Beside the window,He stood
    He stared with captivating eyes at the path of oblivion.glimpsing for someone to pass by and to have a simple talk
    Still waiting...
    Time has engulfed away his patience
    Pride was eaten bt his innocence
    No one is passing by the oblivious path
    His heart was tremendously naive to fall asleep
    He eagerly stared ath the ptag of oblivion for someone to happily mingle with
    At last someone has passed by the path of oblivion
    They shared each others experiences...
    Temporarily feelings mendin slowly the thirst in their hearts
    I loved her so much.... i would dare to risk my own life only to save her from dying....
    I loved my GF...
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    Re: Oblivious Solitude

    ones path is always twisted into torment
    when it comes to sharing your heart nothing
    really sooths the storm that rages .

    very good poem i liked it a lot
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: Oblivious Solitude

    ....... wow that was deep......and sad in a way lol i dont like sad things life is beter when u are happy

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    Re: Oblivious Solitude

    THANKS^^...
    I just remember something that inspred me enough and at the same time I can't sleep and I was reading a book..
    I loved her so much.... i would dare to risk my own life only to save her from dying....
    I loved my GF...
    http://i52.tinypic.com/zxa8pj.jpg[/IMG

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