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Reply With Quoteo.o... well I think you just spoke one persons mind that I've been having issues with..............
anyway.. i like it. It was different but yet It kept me attached. ^-^ I hope you post more poems. I'd love to read them.
Shining light of great
Let my body fly to the sky
May the Seraphim be blessed
When tidal waves crash
Though torrents of hatred
Are running between us
Will you let me stay
I beg of you my superior
Why do you shackle me to the ground
Is it that I am unworthy
Or be it something larger
Deny is all you do
Shall I just let it be
No I cannot
Keep it silent any longer
You are far too afraid
Of letting me go
Shackling my soul
Binding my body
Manipulating my mind
It is all in fear
The fear of not being needed
Volcanoes of anger
Are errupting from you
As the devil be damned
Today my body doth fly to the sky
Blazing fright of great
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Read and Comment please! worked hard on this one.
A big thanks to Renn for the sig! THANK YOU!
o.o... well I think you just spoke one persons mind that I've been having issues with..............
anyway.. i like it. It was different but yet It kept me attached. ^-^ I hope you post more poems. I'd love to read them.
its a really cool Poem shadow, you can tell you really put effort into it and described things really well, it did create a little story which is cool
Great work, hope to see more soon!
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It feels like i'm at a beach! open free, but yet every thing is being torn apart! Keep up the work! cant wait for more.
I tryed to see things from your point of view but i cant seem to get my head that far up my ass!
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