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    Otaku Nodes Champion, Flames of Fury Champion shadowrulz may be famous one day shadowrulz may be famous one day shadowrulz's Avatar
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    Obtaining Freedom

    Shining light of great
    Let my body fly to the sky
    May the Seraphim be blessed
    When tidal waves crash
    Though torrents of hatred
    Are running between us
    Will you let me stay
    I beg of you my superior
    Why do you shackle me to the ground
    Is it that I am unworthy
    Or be it something larger
    Deny is all you do
    Shall I just let it be
    No I cannot
    Keep it silent any longer
    You are far too afraid
    Of letting me go
    Shackling my soul
    Binding my body
    Manipulating my mind
    It is all in fear
    The fear of not being needed
    Volcanoes of anger
    Are errupting from you
    As the devil be damned
    Today my body doth fly to the sky
    Blazing fright of great
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    Re: Obtaining Freedom

    o.o... well I think you just spoke one persons mind that I've been having issues with..............

    anyway.. i like it. It was different but yet It kept me attached. ^-^ I hope you post more poems. I'd love to read them.

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    Re: Obtaining Freedom

    its a really cool Poem shadow, you can tell you really put effort into it and described things really well, it did create a little story which is cool

    Great work, hope to see more soon!
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    Re: Obtaining Freedom

    It feels like i'm at a beach! open free, but yet every thing is being torn apart! Keep up the work! cant wait for more.
    I tryed to see things from your point of view but i cant seem to get my head that far up my ass!
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