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    Ocean of Happiness

    when this gloomy town is tinted by dusk
    as this heart warming day goes by
    i drown in an ocean of happiness
    like i have nothing to fear
    i smile as i sink but i dont know why
    to my suprise
    even on this fateful day the sky
    is always clear

    as if without distance between us
    she constantly appear
    that girl with those sparkly eyes
    rendering me completely careless

    i wish for that same smile
    at that same place
    for just a little longer

    when im with her
    everyday and every step is a precious memory
    in the making
    that can never disappear

    can you tell me this is love?
    this warm feeling inside
    this faint gentle breaze in the air

    can you tell me everything will be ok like this ocean
    of happiness thats drifting me away

    so please,
    to the one i love
    can you tell me that you love me too?
    even if its a lie, to beable to hear it from you
    is like a global incantation

    this magical incantation that can carry my dreams
    to an endless destination

    i sing a song to myself, reminding me of us
    i do the things i do best, i hope they'll make
    you happy

    like a love story we've seen before
    i look forward to the next time we meet

    spinning round and round i want to
    pretend im dizzy and fall into her arms
    - DONG - Q( '_')-O (x_-)


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    Re: Ocean of Happiness

    Nice I like. I have nothing bad to say about, but I love the theme you place around it. And the suroundings (<-- Spell error?) Very classic. Lets see more. ^.^
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    Re: Ocean of Happiness

    It started out fantastic! But than you kind of rambled on and abruptly ended. Clean it up a bit. But great making of a awesome poem!

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