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Reply With QuoteWhat a beautiful poem you have made in your hands. Hope to see more in the future.
Is an experience that is full of wonders that it can be respected at most of
a life time that itself cannot be exposed to a full of answer that neither falls out to the god.
The ocean is the same full of wonders of life, but in a toal different
spacial area when life reaches to its fullest nature presertatives.
I hope the good wills of everyone's best lives until they breathed their last breath of soul taking which, 'thous to our internal life of god that seeks us for good and takes out the last breath of soul.
The ocean is a different way of life that rouses its waves backand forth like a cradle that rocks softly and adorable baby to sleep in order to get evil's harm ways which is not controversial that can be part of gods great purities of light heavenly soul.
What a beautiful poem you have made in your hands. Hope to see more in the future.
「When I'm sad, I stop being sad and be awesome instead」
it's lovely... did you just think of it or is it an old one??? I like it alot... it reminds me of a beach in a game that i played once.
No i have not got it from no one just thought about it myself what Ifelt about only thats allOriginally Posted by Jamie5192
what I meant was... did you think of it as you was putting it up or did you write it a cuple years ago???
No I have not wrote this poem years ago I actually wrote this over the weekend as my rough draft and did some editing and made it feel like I was in there because I lived through the entire life of mine which was really unexpecting to me sounds more detailing huh?
I like this poem of yours quite well... It's seems really relaxing to me, it actually makes me think of the sea too and it's good for I rarely think of the calm, beautiful sea...
I enjoyed reading this.
yea... but I like it... I like poems that portray the author's feelings... makes them seem more real to me...^^ Keep it up!
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