+ Reply to Thread
Page 1 of 2 1 2 LastLast
Results 1 to 8 of 11

Thread: Ocean Of Life

  1. #1
    God Of Angelz Submarine Champion, Rocket Racer MX Champion, Pencak Champion, Grand Prix Challenge 2 Champion, Twelve Swap Champion, Penguin Pass Champion, Crab Volleyball Champion, Hockey Shooter Champion, Trick Master Funky Champion, Mah-Jong Connect Champion, W.R.A.X. Champion dark1angel may be famous one day dark1angel's Avatar
    Join Date
    Jan 2007
    Location
    Where the angels fly within.
    Posts
    1,003
    Thanks
    144
    Thanked 64 Times in 60 Posts

    Ocean Of Life

    Is an experience that is full of wonders that it can be respected at most of
    a life time that itself cannot be exposed to a full of answer that neither falls out to the god.

    The ocean is the same full of wonders of life, but in a toal different
    spacial area when life reaches to its fullest nature presertatives.
    I hope the good wills of everyone's best lives until they breathed their last breath of soul taking which, 'thous to our internal life of god that seeks us for good and takes out the last breath of soul.

    The ocean is a different way of life that rouses its waves backand forth like a cradle that rocks softly and adorable baby to sleep in order to get evil's harm ways which is not controversial that can be part of gods great purities of light heavenly soul.

  2. #2
    「Someone」 Goo Slasher Champion, Fish Kill Champion, Rapid Motion Champion, Cell-Out Champion, Sober Santa 2 Champion, Flower Girl Champion KuwiRules145 is off to a good start KuwiRules145's Avatar
    Join Date
    Apr 2007
    Location
    Under your bed
    Posts
    960
    Thanks
    4
    Thanked 25 Times in 17 Posts

    Re: Ocean Of Life

    What a beautiful poem you have made in your hands. Hope to see more in the future.
    「When I'm sad, I stop being sad and be awesome instead」

  3. #3
    Banned Jamie5192 is off to a good start Jamie5192's Avatar
    Join Date
    Apr 2007
    Posts
    377
    Thanks
    0
    Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts

    Re: Ocean Of Life

    it's lovely... did you just think of it or is it an old one??? I like it alot... it reminds me of a beach in a game that i played once.

  4. #4
    God Of Angelz Submarine Champion, Rocket Racer MX Champion, Pencak Champion, Grand Prix Challenge 2 Champion, Twelve Swap Champion, Penguin Pass Champion, Crab Volleyball Champion, Hockey Shooter Champion, Trick Master Funky Champion, Mah-Jong Connect Champion, W.R.A.X. Champion dark1angel may be famous one day dark1angel's Avatar
    Join Date
    Jan 2007
    Location
    Where the angels fly within.
    Posts
    1,003
    Thanks
    144
    Thanked 64 Times in 60 Posts

    Re: Ocean Of Life

    Quote Originally Posted by Jamie5192 View Post
    it's lovely... did you just think of it or is it an old one??? I like it alot... it reminds me of a beach in a game that i played once.
    No i have not got it from no one just thought about it myself what Ifelt about only thats all

  5. #5
    Banned Jamie5192 is off to a good start Jamie5192's Avatar
    Join Date
    Apr 2007
    Posts
    377
    Thanks
    0
    Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts

    Re: Ocean Of Life

    Quote Originally Posted by dark1angel View Post
    No i have not got it from no one just thought about it myself what Ifelt about only thats all
    what I meant was... did you think of it as you was putting it up or did you write it a cuple years ago???

  6. #6
    God Of Angelz Submarine Champion, Rocket Racer MX Champion, Pencak Champion, Grand Prix Challenge 2 Champion, Twelve Swap Champion, Penguin Pass Champion, Crab Volleyball Champion, Hockey Shooter Champion, Trick Master Funky Champion, Mah-Jong Connect Champion, W.R.A.X. Champion dark1angel may be famous one day dark1angel's Avatar
    Join Date
    Jan 2007
    Location
    Where the angels fly within.
    Posts
    1,003
    Thanks
    144
    Thanked 64 Times in 60 Posts

    Re: Ocean Of Life

    Quote Originally Posted by Jamie5192 View Post
    what I meant was... did you think of it as you was putting it up or did you write it a cuple years ago???
    No I have not wrote this poem years ago I actually wrote this over the weekend as my rough draft and did some editing and made it feel like I was in there because I lived through the entire life of mine which was really unexpecting to me sounds more detailing huh?

  7. #7
    Angelic Lasura may be famous one day Lasura's Avatar
    Join Date
    Apr 2007
    Location
    In a Demon's Arms
    Posts
    1,875
    Thanks
    56
    Thanked 39 Times in 36 Posts

    Re: Ocean Of Life

    I like this poem of yours quite well... It's seems really relaxing to me, it actually makes me think of the sea too and it's good for I rarely think of the calm, beautiful sea...
    I enjoyed reading this.

    My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge

  8. #8
    Banned Jamie5192 is off to a good start Jamie5192's Avatar
    Join Date
    Apr 2007
    Posts
    377
    Thanks
    0
    Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts

    Re: Ocean Of Life

    Quote Originally Posted by dark1angel View Post
    No I have not wrote this poem years ago I actually wrote this over the weekend as my rough draft and did some editing and made it feel like I was in there because I lived through the entire life of mine which was really unexpecting to me sounds more detailing huh?
    yea... but I like it... I like poems that portray the author's feelings... makes them seem more real to me...^^ Keep it up!

+ Reply to Thread
Page 1 of 2 1 2 LastLast

Similar Threads

  1. In to the ocean
    By Lost_Love in forum Poems
    Replies: 3
    Last Post: Jul 31, 2006, 09:42 PM
  2. Ocean of Happiness
    By winter blade in forum Poems
    Replies: 2
    Last Post: May 26, 2006, 11:29 PM
  3. Star Ocean EX
    By hataki kakashi in forum The Thread Vault
    Replies: 6
    Last Post: Dec 31, 2005, 09:31 PM
  4. Star Ocean
    By badslildevil in forum The Thread Vault
    Replies: 14
    Last Post: May 12, 2005, 08:13 PM
  5. PSX - Star Ocean 2 & FVII
    By Ectoruss in forum The Thread Vault
    Replies: 12
    Last Post: Jan 23, 2005, 11:35 AM

Bookmarks

Posting Permissions

  • You may not post new threads
  • You may not post replies
  • You may not post attachments
  • You may not edit your posts