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    Re: Ode to heartfelt poetry.

    wha? @.@ me? Im such a humble poet to be called your favourite..

    yes it is...i always wondered what my gf and ex feel when i wrote poems to them... i was having 2 gf's at the same time..i know it'll be bad.. and this poem just shown some of what they might have felt.. ^^

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    Re: Ode to heartfelt poetry.

    OOooooooh shame on you Rayme... *waves finger* Yeah... its a painful thing to see someone lifted up, when it puts you down.

    Hey.... did you give me the rating too? No one has ever rated my work before... this is a first.... Thank you!
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    Re: Ode to heartfelt poetry.

    It wasn't him. It was me. I just learned how to do it and I liked this one so much that it diserved the extra attention.

    You never really loved me/You never really cared/It was all just a game to boost your ego/Those feelings never really there/ I'm filing emotional bankruptcy/My heart can take no more debt/Theres no more "money" there to spend. === Besides tee hee SHE loves me!

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    Re: Ode to heartfelt poetry.

    dude<<

    I don't know where you get your inspirations from... but man, I'd so shop there.
    This whole poetry thing didn't mean that much to me before, but then I read others work and decided thusly that poetry is as valuable as oxygen. The words are the people... the feelings are from within, and you're busting up...

    I know I could never feel your pain because it is yours alone, but I'd like to. Just to test it out and feel that much more human..

    But hey, don't tear too much, cause y'know... I'd really miss you.
    the love you withhold is the pain you carry.

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    Re: Ode to heartfelt poetry.

    I think it was me...~!! *pokes bratling* Liar..

    Hey.... did you give me the rating too? No one has ever rated my work before... this is a first.... Thank you
    really? i think all your work deserve a 4 star and higher...

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