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    Ode to my Killer

    Before you shoot, look into my eyes,
    Can you see the same fear you feel inside?
    You may see me as someone who has it all,
    But I have the same fears and hesitations after all.

    I know your pain and what is tearing at you,
    For I have the same self- conscious feelings too.
    So before you shoot look deep and you may realize
    You see a lot of yourself in my eyes.

    Before you shoot, think and feel what would it be like,
    To be on the other end of my strife.
    Will taking from me ease your pain?
    Or can we deal with this maybe some other way.

    Before you shoot come into my heart,
    Think of all your tearing apart,
    My life is in your hands it’s true,
    Do you really want this consequence tearing away at you?

    Before you shoot or think that thought,
    Tell me of your pain and what you’ve sought.
    Maybe you’ll find someone you’ll treasure
    You never gave me a chance to show what I have to offer.

    I can only ask these things and it’s all up to you,
    I have no power, which is what you wanted to do.
    So now that you’ve got what you wanted to do,
    Please think of these things before you shoot.


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    Re: Ode to my Killer

    wow i like this ode
    trying to convence him
    not to kill you. very awesome
    ode othello
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: Ode to my Killer

    dam a victim's poem before getting shot.........tht is good.....u're getting better, Othello. Hope to read more of ur work, my lovelie

    Thanks for the siggy Ky-lyrra

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    Re: Ode to my Killer

    oooo! Lots of suspence! The last words of a dying man!
    Great poem! Keep it up!

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    Wow....that was....awesome!!!!!!! I love it Awesome work
    Made by- Ryomakurosaki (Thank you sooooo much!!) ^__^

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    Re: Ode to my Killer

    wow this poem is pretty kool, nice job man, keep it up.

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    Re: Ode to my Killer

    wow awesome i really liked it
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    When u (l)love(l) sum1, say it. Say it loud. Say it right away, or the moment just passes you by(l)... Love Is Sacrifice, But Never Sarifice Your Love... Quitters never win and winners never quit, but those who never quit AND never win are idiots.

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    Re: Ode to my Killer

    great poem!!!!!! a kind of poem with deep essence. a poem that speaks itself to the reader (well... i felt that i was the one who will kill as i read along...waheheheh) great poem! keep it up!
    it does communicate with the mind, and what i love about is the way you make the reader picture out the senario. effective poem

    Thank you very much,Reese for this wonderful signature ^_^

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