Ode to my Killer

Othello · Jun 14, 2006, 08:22 AM

Before you shoot, look into my eyes,
Can you see the same fear you feel inside?
You may see me as someone who has it all,
But I have the same fears and hesitations after all.

I know your pain and what is tearing at you,
For I have the same self- conscious feelings too.
So before you shoot look deep and you may realize
You see a lot of yourself in my eyes.

Before you shoot, think and feel what would it be like,
To be on the other end of my strife.
Will taking from me ease your pain?
Or can we deal with this maybe some other way.

Before you shoot come into my heart,
Think of all your tearing apart,
My life is in your hands it’s true,
Do you really want this consequence tearing away at you?

Before you shoot or think that thought,
Tell me of your pain and what you’ve sought.
Maybe you’ll find someone you’ll treasure
You never gave me a chance to show what I have to offer.

I can only ask these things and it’s all up to you,
I have no power, which is what you wanted to do.
So now that you’ve got what you wanted to do,
Please think of these things before you shoot.

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*HolderOfTheDarkChalice* · Jun 14, 2006, 09:45 AM

wow i like this ode
trying to convence him
not to kill you. very awesome
ode othello

*Blade X* · Jun 14, 2006, 09:57 AM

dam a victim's poem before getting shot.........tht is good.....u're getting better, Othello. Hope to read more of ur work, my lovelie

The Fighter · Jun 14, 2006, 12:14 PM

oooo! Lots of suspence! The last words of a dying man!
Great poem! Keep it up!

*Shinigami's_Angel* · Jun 14, 2006, 06:58 PM

Wow....that was....awesome!!!!!!! I love it

Awesome work

*ketaro* · Jun 14, 2006, 08:15 PM

wow this poem is pretty kool, nice job man, keep it up.

i_love_sasuke_uchia216 · Jul 14, 2006, 08:04 PM

wow awesome i really liked it

raja_psyche · Jul 15, 2006, 05:20 AM

great poem!!!!!! a kind of poem with deep essence. a poem that speaks itself to the reader (well... i felt that i was the one who will kill as i read along...waheheheh) great poem! keep it up!
it does communicate with the mind, and what i love about is the way you make the reader picture out the senario. effective poem

SousukeSagara · Jul 15, 2006, 07:18 AM

*Bang* I demand a plain roll! Very good! Nice poem...

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Othello Diamond in the Rough Join Date: May 2006 Location: Between the reaches of ones heart, mind and soul...where only a small light lingers. Posts: 177 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 770	Ode to my Killer Before you shoot, look into my eyes, Can you see the same fear you feel inside? You may see me as someone who has it all, But I have the same fears and hesitations after all. I know your pain and what is tearing at you, For I have the same self- conscious feelings too. So before you shoot look deep and you may realize You see a lot of yourself in my eyes. Before you shoot, think and feel what would it be like, To be on the other end of my strife. Will taking from me ease your pain? Or can we deal with this maybe some other way. Before you shoot come into my heart, Think of all your tearing apart, My life is in your hands it’s true, Do you really want this consequence tearing away at you? Before you shoot or think that thought, Tell me of your pain and what you’ve sought. Maybe you’ll find someone you’ll treasure You never gave me a chance to show what I have to offer. I can only ask these things and it’s all up to you, I have no power, which is what you wanted to do. So now that you’ve got what you wanted to do, Please think of these things before you shoot. <comments> __________________ Thanks Mischievious Kiss.
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