Oh Little One

I upset a few people with this one >>; You're meant to read it slowly (not stupididly slow though). Once again, written yonks ago (and when i say yonks i mean 2years or so?).

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Why do you sigh oh little one,
As if people hear your pain.
Why do you cry oh little one,
No one cares, so you have nothing to gain.

Why do you love oh little one,
Your love is never returned.
Why do you hate oh little one,
No one cares, have you not learnt.

Why do you scream oh little one,
Your voice is just carried in the wind.
Why do you bleed oh little one,
Spilt blood won't change a thing.

Why did you go oh little one,
Everyone misses you dearly.
Why did you die oh little one,
I place flowers for you yearly.

it very pretty i expessilly like the ending

Yummy
I could eat your poems up...
I espesaly liked this one!
:}
it is really good
I guess the person left
and now you realize
how much you miss them???
I don't assume...i just guess...tell me if i am wrong!

it's good. i like it. nice emotion

wow- i really like it! :2thumbs:

really emotional. I like it a lot.

This is one of my favs great jobs