Oh Little One

Sarlinari · Aug 10, 2006, 08:54 AM

I upset a few people with this one >>; You're meant to read it slowly (not stupididly slow though). Once again, written yonks ago (and when i say yonks i mean 2years or so?).

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Why do you sigh oh little one,
As if people hear your pain.
Why do you cry oh little one,
No one cares, so you have nothing to gain.

Why do you love oh little one,
Your love is never returned.
Why do you hate oh little one,
No one cares, have you not learnt.

Why do you scream oh little one,
Your voice is just carried in the wind.
Why do you bleed oh little one,
Spilt blood won't change a thing.

Why did you go oh little one,
Everyone misses you dearly.
Why did you die oh little one,
I place flowers for you yearly.

tupacs_wifey · Aug 10, 2006, 08:56 AM

it very pretty i expessilly like the ending

Lost_Love · Aug 10, 2006, 11:16 AM

Yummy
I could eat your poems up...
I espesaly liked this one!
:}
it is really good
I guess the person left
and now you realize
how much you miss them???
I don't assume...i just guess...tell me if i am wrong!

*princesslady* · Aug 10, 2006, 11:18 AM

it's good. i like it. nice emotion

forever a dreamer · Aug 10, 2006, 11:40 AM

wow- i really like it!

lovejam · Aug 10, 2006, 12:51 PM

really emotional. I like it a lot.

N!tr0-Glyc3r1n · Aug 10, 2006, 09:45 PM

This is one of my favs great jobs

Aug 10, 2006, 08:54 AM	#1 (permalink)
Sarlinari Newbie Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: London, England Posts: 69 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 210	Oh Little One I upset a few people with this one >>; You're meant to read it slowly (not stupididly slow though). Once again, written yonks ago (and when i say yonks i mean 2years or so?). ------------------------------ Why do you sigh oh little one, As if people hear your pain. Why do you cry oh little one, No one cares, so you have nothing to gain. Why do you love oh little one, Your love is never returned. Why do you hate oh little one, No one cares, have you not learnt. Why do you scream oh little one, Your voice is just carried in the wind. Why do you bleed oh little one, Spilt blood won't change a thing. Why did you go oh little one, Everyone misses you dearly. Why did you die oh little one, I place flowers for you yearly.
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Aug 10, 2006, 08:56 AM	#2 (permalink)
tupacs_wifey Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: In My own heart Posts: 441 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 807	Re: Oh Little One it very pretty i expessilly like the ending __________________ HolderOfTheDarkChalice's LiL sis
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Aug 10, 2006, 11:16 AM	#3 (permalink)
Lost_Love Newbie Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: I don't live anywhere, the only place I can stay safe in is the head atop my shoulders Posts: 79 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 110	Re: Oh Little One Yummy I could eat your poems up... I espesaly liked this one! :} it is really good I guess the person left and now you realize how much you miss them??? I don't assume...i just guess...tell me if i am wrong! __________________ there are no raindrops on roses but there are still tears in my eyes...
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princesslady Kyle's mom is a bytch Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: In solitude Posts: 1,450 Thanks: 6 Thanked 17 Times in 17 Posts Credits: 7,378	Re: Oh Little One it's good. i like it. nice emotion __________________ *Born to rule, raised to lead, taught to establish: The African Queen*
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forever a dreamer Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: In my little imaginary world Posts: 102 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 436	Re: Oh Little One wow- i really like it! __________________ You laugh at me because I'm different. I laugh at you because your all the same. Thanks Hieislove for the siggy!
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Aug 10, 2006, 12:51 PM	#6 (permalink)
lovejam Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: florida Posts: 122 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 394	Re: Oh Little One really emotional. I like it a lot. __________________ We traded blows in violent prose And made arrangements heaven knows..
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N!tr0-Glyc3r1n Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: where ur not Posts: 290 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 513	Re: Oh Little One This is one of my favs great jobs __________________ thank u SasuraiHell go -=NOOBZ=- clan!
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