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    Oh Little One

    I upset a few people with this one >>; You're meant to read it slowly (not stupididly slow though). Once again, written yonks ago (and when i say yonks i mean 2years or so?).

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    Why do you sigh oh little one,
    As if people hear your pain.
    Why do you cry oh little one,
    No one cares, so you have nothing to gain.

    Why do you love oh little one,
    Your love is never returned.
    Why do you hate oh little one,
    No one cares, have you not learnt.

    Why do you scream oh little one,
    Your voice is just carried in the wind.
    Why do you bleed oh little one,
    Spilt blood won't change a thing.

    Why did you go oh little one,
    Everyone misses you dearly.
    Why did you die oh little one,
    I place flowers for you yearly.

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    Re: Oh Little One

    it very pretty i expessilly like the ending

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    Re: Oh Little One

    Yummy
    I could eat your poems up...
    I espesaly liked this one!
    :}
    it is really good
    I guess the person left
    and now you realize
    how much you miss them???
    I don't assume...i just guess...tell me if i am wrong!
    there are no raindrops on roses but there are still tears in my eyes...

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    Re: Oh Little One

    it's good. i like it. nice emotion

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    Re: Oh Little One

    wow- i really like it!
    You laugh at me because I'm different. I laugh at you because your all the same.

    Thanks Hieislove for the siggy!

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    Re: Oh Little One

    really emotional. I like it a lot.

    We traded blows in violent prose
    And made arrangements heaven knows..


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    Re: Oh Little One

    This is one of my favs great jobs


    thank u SasuraiHell
    go -=NOOBZ=- clan!

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