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    Old Willow

    For a long
    Time I've been Posted in this spot,
    Through my years
    Humans hearts were a rot.

    Men died around me
    For that I cry,
    For their exponential hate
    I'd cry.

    Please lord
    Save this old willow,
    Whose loves
    Been covered my humanities shadow.

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    Re: Old Willow

    Wow that was good, and i shuld have the right mind to say something reall mean, but no, i like your poem cause your trying to view the points, and thought of Willow was awesome.


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    Re: Old Willow

    I'm not fond of the ehyming. The poem would have been better without the rhymes.
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