Olvidar "Forgetting"

Jairo · Nov 05, 2007, 03:45 PM

Olvidar el pasado,
Olvidar lo nunca pensado;
Olvidar lo que eh pasado,
Olvidar que estuve enamorado.
Olvidar puede ser la mejor opcion,
olvidarte de tu antigua relacion.
Olvidar?
olvidar sin poner atencion.

Forgetting the past,
To forget what never have thought;
To forget what I have passed,
To forget that I was in love.
Forgetting can be the best option,
To forget of your old relationdhip.
Forgetting?
Forgettong without puting attention.

Hey I hope this translation is good.
I hope you enjoy it.

*RayMe* · Nov 06, 2007, 12:10 AM

@.@ this is deep... *tries to read in spanish* oh my.. love the sound that came out...

nicely done

keep it up ^^

*Lasura* · Nov 06, 2007, 12:55 AM

Ahh... indeed very deep... such a thought put in so very few words... a nice nice work done ^^ And I see that in spanish it perfectly rhymes... nice... very nice ^^

I really like how you write and I hope to see more ^^

BrokenLover101 · Nov 06, 2007, 01:32 AM

so nice to see couples agreeing with each other but sadly i must disagree... to me it didn't flow the way i thought it would.. maybe it's just me.. i dunno but it seemed to be... missing something.. it was still great work and i'd love to see more from you. ^-^

Astaroth · Nov 06, 2007, 02:36 PM

I agree with RayMe......this is very deep....and the words are very insightful
Great job!!!!!!

Jairo · Nov 06, 2007, 02:43 PM

Thanks my friend Astaroth. And if the words are very deep is because I don't got it out of my mind, I put my feelings in words.

Astaroth · Nov 06, 2007, 02:55 PM

and that is how it should be done!!!!!!!!!!
you are welcome

Nov 05, 2007, 03:45 PM	#1 (permalink)
Jairo Newbie Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: San Diego Posts: 36 Thanks: 3 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 1,508	Olvidar "Forgetting" Olvidar el pasado, Olvidar lo nunca pensado; Olvidar lo que eh pasado, Olvidar que estuve enamorado. Olvidar puede ser la mejor opcion, olvidarte de tu antigua relacion. Olvidar? olvidar sin poner atencion. Forgetting the past, To forget what never have thought; To forget what I have passed, To forget that I was in love. Forgetting can be the best option, To forget of your old relationdhip. Forgetting? Forgettong without puting attention. Hey I hope this translation is good. I hope you enjoy it. __________________ La vida no es injusta, Uno es injusto con la vida. Live isn't unfair, We are unfair with Her. made by ryomakurosaki
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Nov 06, 2007, 12:10 AM	#2 (permalink)
RayMe 1 )3^^( )N Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Somewhere i would love to leave right now for somewhere better... Posts: 3,601 Thanks: 54 Thanked 26 Times in 23 Posts Credits: 59,148	Re: Olvidar "Forgetting" @.@ this is deep... tries to read in spanish oh my.. love the sound that came out... nicely done keep it up ^^ __________________ Legion Ketsueki Lives on~!! The best ever Lasura~! >>>myspace<<<
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Nov 06, 2007, 12:55 AM	#3 (permalink)
Lasura Angelic Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: In a Demon's Arms Posts: 1,869 Thanks: 56 Thanked 33 Times in 31 Posts Credits: 49,375	Re: Olvidar "Forgetting" Ahh... indeed very deep... such a thought put in so very few words... a nice nice work done ^^ And I see that in spanish it perfectly rhymes... nice... very nice ^^ I really like how you write and I hope to see more ^^ __________________ My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge
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BrokenLover101 Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Nov 2007 Location: Hell... wanna join? Posts: 262 Thanks: 36 Thanked 26 Times in 25 Posts Credits: 12,324	Re: Olvidar "Forgetting" so nice to see couples agreeing with each other but sadly i must disagree... to me it didn't flow the way i thought it would.. maybe it's just me.. i dunno but it seemed to be... missing something.. it was still great work and i'd love to see more from you. ^-^ __________________ *\\\ Never Love Again ///*
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Astaroth Chtonian Slayer Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: you really do not want to know Posts: 563 Thanks: 23 Thanked 47 Times in 45 Posts Credits: 31,439	Re: Olvidar "Forgetting" I agree with RayMe......this is very deep....and the words are very insightful Great job!!!!!! __________________ DO NOT MAKE ME UNLEASH MY INNER DEMON
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Nov 06, 2007, 02:43 PM	#6 (permalink)
Jairo Newbie Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: San Diego Posts: 36 Thanks: 3 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 1,508	Re: Olvidar "Forgetting" Thanks my friend Astaroth. And if the words are very deep is because I don't got it out of my mind, I put my feelings in words. __________________ La vida no es injusta, Uno es injusto con la vida. Live isn't unfair, We are unfair with Her. made by ryomakurosaki
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Astaroth Chtonian Slayer Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: you really do not want to know Posts: 563 Thanks: 23 Thanked 47 Times in 45 Posts Credits: 31,439	Re: Olvidar "Forgetting" and that is how it should be done!!!!!!!!!! you are welcome __________________ DO NOT MAKE ME UNLEASH MY INNER DEMON
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