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    Olympic haiku

    Rainbows of athletes
    Grand victories and defeats
    Rainbows of linked rings

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    Re: Olympic haiku

    Simple and to the point. I liked it. I do like how you showed the diversity in this one. very nice.

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    Re: Olympic haiku

    Quote Originally Posted by Shade/K' Heart View Post
    Simple and to the point. I liked it. I do like how you showed the diversity in this one. very nice.
    I am glad that you got the point of the rainbow representing the athletes and diverse appearance. I was really afraid people wouldn't get it but seeing all the athletes in the opening ceremony and the plethora of colors of Europeans, Africans, Asians, and even a few South Americans it really was a living rainbow.

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