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    Once Loved...

    It was beautiful then...
    ugly now that it's long gone.
    A love that bloomed of fake flowers,
    and mowed over in this fake lawn.

    I needed to get away from that,
    fakeness that was once sought.
    I just pray for my one now,
    and hope my searching isn't for naught.

    Angel...I know you are near.
    Give me a love instead of another tear.
    Give me the light so I can see,
    and know that I can be loved tenderly.

    Angel... dear sweet angel.
    Be that one to guide me.
    I pray that your out there,
    and waiting for a guy like me.

    I'm an overflowed dam,
    waiting for burst with all this love.
    So I hit my knees and ask,
    the only God above.

    Please let me love,
    just one more time before I'm gone.
    So I knew my life was worth living,
    and not been here and run-along.

    Just one kiss,
    one pair of lips.....
    Is that too much to ask,
    is a loving share of tenderness?

    It's all I ask and pray for.
    Is that one last one kiss more.
    Just a kiss and a simple loving kiss.
    Even if it's on pre-graven dying rose drying lips.

    Justin, The White Rose

    Far be it for me to be anything special, when the only special thing I desire with me, is the special person I share my gifts with.

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    Re: Once Loved...

    the poem is great way to express yourself by what I can tell you had some hardache I hope you cheer up men an take time to found the right person who you click with

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    good poem... i can feel the heartache. Very, very, very very, deep poem you got there.

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    Re: Once Loved...

    awwwww =[ i almost cried when i read your poem justin =[ it was really good^^ i hope you come back soon =]/ =[
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