once onloved but now loved by all
a few years ago
i loved you but you never felt the same
you used to walk past me and luagh
but now im
older
wiser
smarter
now you cant revist me and you dont
leave now you want to be with me
but you want to know what
you ant goin to be getting me
you never liked me then so i dont like you now
Re: once onloved but now loved by all
No bad kid...
I understood what you were saying just a few spelling errors here and there but I got the meaning
Re: once onloved but now loved by all
Yeah its a cool poem, just needs a spell cheak really.
Re: once onloved but now loved by all
awww ok TT__TT (yeah u all know i cant spell anways)
but thanks for the comments ^__^
Re: once onloved but now loved by all
Equinn you have done it again and it's cool that you can't spell because your poems still make it's point! :thumb:
Re: once onloved but now loved by all
kinda hard to understand, spelling and grammer need some work. some of the sentences were grouped together, but i think i got the point
Re: once onloved but now loved by all
lmao yeah thanks ^___^ its good you all liked it ^__^