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    a few years ago
    i loved you but you never felt the same
    you used to walk past me and luagh
    but now im
    older
    wiser
    smarter
    now you cant revist me and you dont
    leave now you want to be with me
    but you want to know what
    you ant goin to be getting me
    you never liked me then so i dont like you now

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    Re: once onloved but now loved by all

    No bad kid...
    I understood what you were saying just a few spelling errors here and there but I got the meaning

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    Re: once onloved but now loved by all

    Yeah its a cool poem, just needs a spell cheak really.
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    Re: once onloved but now loved by all

    awww ok TT__TT (yeah u all know i cant spell anways)
    but thanks for the comments ^__^

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    Re: once onloved but now loved by all

    Equinn you have done it again and it's cool that you can't spell because your poems still make it's point!

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    Re: once onloved but now loved by all

    kinda hard to understand, spelling and grammer need some work. some of the sentences were grouped together, but i think i got the point

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    lmao yeah thanks ^___^ its good you all liked it ^__^

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