once onloved but now loved by all

*equinn* · Oct 27, 2006, 06:04 AM

a few years ago
i loved you but you never felt the same
you used to walk past me and luagh
but now im
older
wiser
smarter
now you cant revist me and you dont
leave now you want to be with me
but you want to know what
you ant goin to be getting me
you never liked me then so i dont like you now

*solking* · Oct 27, 2006, 06:27 AM

No bad kid...
I understood what you were saying just a few spelling errors here and there but I got the meaning

Sazzy · Oct 27, 2006, 06:48 AM

Yeah its a cool poem, just needs a spell cheak really.

*equinn* · Oct 27, 2006, 07:10 AM

awww ok TT__TT (yeah u all know i cant spell anways)
but thanks for the comments ^__^

*BlueFox1* · Oct 27, 2006, 12:21 PM

Equinn you have done it again and it's cool that you can't spell because your poems still make it's point!

Shu · Oct 27, 2006, 12:48 PM

kinda hard to understand, spelling and grammer need some work. some of the sentences were grouped together, but i think i got the point

*equinn* · Oct 28, 2006, 02:58 AM

lmao yeah thanks ^___^ its good you all liked it ^__^

Oct 27, 2006, 06:04 AM	#1 (permalink)
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solking 4.01 M33-2 Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: In Posts: 1,494 Thanks: 3 Thanked 8 Times in 7 Posts Credits: 13,537	Re: once onloved but now loved by all No bad kid... I understood what you were saying just a few spelling errors here and there but I got the meaning __________________
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Sazzy Member of 22 yr old Club Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: In my imagination restricted by British Society! Posts: 1,835 Thanks: 7 Thanked 19 Times in 15 Posts Credits: 34,739	Re: once onloved but now loved by all Yeah its a cool poem, just needs a spell cheak really. __________________ FAVOURITE THREADS EXPLAIN why, or risk an infraction. Well Just one more sig won't hurt, right? how about another??? Sazzy-Bu.co.uk
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equinn Ao's official cat girl~★ Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: Emerald island (Eire) (Ireland) Posts: 1,681 Thanks: 11 Thanked 30 Times in 28 Posts Credits: 19,781	Re: once onloved but now loved by all awww ok TT__TT (yeah u all know i cant spell anways) but thanks for the comments ^__^ __________________ Lizzie + Phil together for 8 months! and to be longer! WOOP! http://neko-panda.deviantart.com/
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Shu Upcoming Legend Join Date: Mar 2006 Posts: 563 Thanks: 0 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post Credits: 749	Re: once onloved but now loved by all kinda hard to understand, spelling and grammer need some work. some of the sentences were grouped together, but i think i got the point
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