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Old May 29, 2007, 12:00 PM   #1 (permalink)
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You say you love me
You say you care
You say I look perfect no matter what I wear
You say you love me you say that now
You say we will be together someway, somehow.
But am I really your one?
Or am I just another girl won?
Do you really mean everything you say?
Are you really devoted to me everyday?
Do you really like me for me?
Or is it just my body that you see
Are you really mine?
Or am I just another one in line
you tell me.
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Old May 29, 2007, 12:25 PM   #2 (permalink)
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That was amazing. It was hort but sweet. You've really done a good job. Your emotions really shined in this.
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Old May 29, 2007, 01:31 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Oh WOW!!!! This such a touching and hurtful moment!!!! This such a bit of a heart breaken moment!!!!! This such a cool poem! Hope to see more!
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Old May 29, 2007, 01:34 PM   #4 (permalink)
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This is a really good poem.
The rhyming was great too.
I loved it and the way you expressed it.
Wow just great. lol.
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Old May 29, 2007, 10:04 PM   #5 (permalink)
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that's veery sweety nice poem ..deep of love emonatino and i feel some hurt in it ...but geart job ...keep up ...see more ..
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Old May 29, 2007, 10:29 PM   #6 (permalink)
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this poem describes a lot of guys, majority of them...I hate those jerks..,they make it hard for guys like me to find girls like you..what a great way to express yourself! lovely poem.
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Old May 30, 2007, 01:08 PM   #7 (permalink)
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Really great!!! The poem is simple but still it's great... amazing! You must be good to make something simple really wonderful!
This poem has a lot of feelings in it, I love that! Great Work mari (or do you wish me to call you sango?)
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Old May 30, 2007, 08:49 PM   #8 (permalink)
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thank you. mari is fine but did you go to my profile just to check my name? (very flattered)
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thank you. mari is fine but did you go to my profile just to check my name? (very flattered)
Yes, I did. And you have a very, very nice profile!!!!
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