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    Lightbulb The One.

    The only one who's
    said, "You're the best."
    The only one to let
    me get the stress off my chest.

    The one who makes
    all the pain dissapear.
    The one who's thoughts I can
    feel away or right here.

    The one to kiss goodnight
    every time we go to bed.
    The one who's beauty makes
    a man go crazy in the head.

    The one who knows just
    how to treat a man right.
    The kind that likes to
    play DDR all night.

    The one I just described
    doesn't quite exist yet.
    But I know she'll be 'round soon.
    So there's no reason I should fret.

    The one I'm looking for, I hope,
    will stay around until the end.
    But, I really hope that
    she can tolorate my friends. ^_^


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    Re: The One.

    ahh... such a nice poem!!!! ^^ I like it soo much!!! It's so fun! I enjoyed reading it.

    First you describe a perfect girl that makes girls sigh from jelousy and guys- from longing and then you break it off with:
    "The one I just described
    doesn't quite exist yet."! ^^
    That made me laugh!!!! Great!!!! And I really like the optimism in this one!!!

    A great work Sprout! ^^

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    Re: The One.

    Quote Originally Posted by atomik_sprout View Post
    The only one who's
    said, "You're the best."
    The only one to let
    me get the stress off my chest.

    The one who makes
    all the pain dissapear.
    The one who's thoughts I can
    feel away or right here.

    The one to kiss goodnight
    every time we go to bed.
    The one who's beauty makes
    a man go crazy in the head.

    The one who knows just
    how to treat a man right.
    The kind that likes to
    play DDR all night.

    The one I just described
    doesn't quite exist yet.
    But I know she'll be 'round soon.
    So there's no reason I should fret.

    The one I'm looking for, I hope,
    will stay around until the end.
    But, I really hope that
    she can tolorate my friends. ^_^
    Cus me m' dad joe and jamie. We're picky and we don't like "new" Lol. But you'll find her and we'll all love her. (I'll try anyways. Promise.)

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    Re: The One.

    what a great poem and i'm sure you'll find the one some day love the poem though and good luck in finding the one

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    Re: The One.

    Quote Originally Posted by aeonking View Post
    what a great poem and i'm sure you'll find the one some day love the poem though and good luck in finding the one
    Quote Originally Posted by bratling View Post
    Cus me m' dad joe and jamie. We're picky and we don't like "new" Lol. But you'll find her and we'll all love her. (I'll try anyways. Promise.)
    Quote Originally Posted by Lasura View Post
    ahh... such a nice poem!!!! ^^ I like it soo much!!! It's so fun! I enjoyed reading it.

    First you describe a perfect girl that makes girls sigh from jelousy and guys- from longing and then you break it off with:
    "The one I just described
    doesn't quite exist yet."! ^^
    That made me laugh!!!! Great!!!! And I really like the optimism in this one!!!

    A great work Sprout! ^^
    Arigato, Minna-san! ^_^ I was quite amazed with myself when I actually read it, after tranferring it from paper to PC. I'm glad you like it! ~S


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