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Old Jun 12, 2007, 11:12 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Lightbulb The One.

The only one who's
said, "You're the best."
The only one to let
me get the stress off my chest.

The one who makes
all the pain dissapear.
The one who's thoughts I can
feel away or right here.

The one to kiss goodnight
every time we go to bed.
The one who's beauty makes
a man go crazy in the head.

The one who knows just
how to treat a man right.
The kind that likes to
play DDR all night.

The one I just described
doesn't quite exist yet.
But I know she'll be 'round soon.
So there's no reason I should fret.

The one I'm looking for, I hope,
will stay around until the end.
But, I really hope that
she can tolorate my friends. ^_^
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Old Jun 12, 2007, 11:24 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Re: The One.

ahh... such a nice poem!!!! ^^ I like it soo much!!! It's so fun! I enjoyed reading it.

First you describe a perfect girl that makes girls sigh from jelousy and guys- from longing and then you break it off with:
"The one I just described
doesn't quite exist yet."! ^^
That made me laugh!!!! Great!!!! And I really like the optimism in this one!!!

A great work Sprout! ^^
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Old Jun 12, 2007, 11:25 AM   #3 (permalink)
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Re: The One.

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The only one who's
said, "You're the best."
The only one to let
me get the stress off my chest.

The one who makes
all the pain dissapear.
The one who's thoughts I can
feel away or right here.

The one to kiss goodnight
every time we go to bed.
The one who's beauty makes
a man go crazy in the head.

The one who knows just
how to treat a man right.
The kind that likes to
play DDR all night.

The one I just described
doesn't quite exist yet.
But I know she'll be 'round soon.
So there's no reason I should fret.

The one I'm looking for, I hope,
will stay around until the end.
But, I really hope that
she can tolorate my friends. ^_^
Cus me m' dad joe and jamie. We're picky and we don't like "new" Lol. But you'll find her and we'll all love her. (I'll try anyways. Promise.)
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Old Jun 12, 2007, 11:39 AM   #4 (permalink)
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Re: The One.

what a great poem and i'm sure you'll find the one some day love the poem though and good luck in finding the one
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Old Jun 12, 2007, 12:26 PM   #5 (permalink)
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what a great poem and i'm sure you'll find the one some day love the poem though and good luck in finding the one
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Cus me m' dad joe and jamie. We're picky and we don't like "new" Lol. But you'll find her and we'll all love her. (I'll try anyways. Promise.)
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ahh... such a nice poem!!!! ^^ I like it soo much!!! It's so fun! I enjoyed reading it.

First you describe a perfect girl that makes girls sigh from jelousy and guys- from longing and then you break it off with:
"The one I just described
doesn't quite exist yet."! ^^
That made me laugh!!!! Great!!!! And I really like the optimism in this one!!!

A great work Sprout! ^^
Arigato, Minna-san! ^_^ I was quite amazed with myself when I actually read it, after tranferring it from paper to PC. I'm glad you like it! ~S
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