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Old Jun 27, 2006, 06:42 AM   #1 (permalink)
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one of the best love poems i ever wrote

this is a poem i wrote when i wondered how would a guy feel if he's really in love,[ i needed something to draw your attention , forgive me]
to tell you the truth i never inlove with anyone ,on the matter of being accept i was rejected , as if too many poeple left to hear nothing from me , as if i do not even count as some one that is with them , my only place to be heard was here , you can't imagine how many people hepled me including here , but things are turning better now , ^^ i got to meet many people , on the internet and here ^^, i wish to dedicate this poem to this site and a person i know and of course all who helped and all the people in this site who feel the same way,,,
sorry if i was taking to much of your time reading that
thanx anyways^^
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since my wings were shattered
i lost my power
since i saw my feathers falling
i lost my hope
since i saw my self dying
i lost my will
but in all this pain only one person came to me
she was the only one to help me
an angel perhapes
i felt safe next to her
i felt secure next to her
i felt happy next to her
with her next to me
i saw my wings build
i saw my self flying once more
my wings had the strength to carry me once more
those feathers that were built from my feelings have grown
those wings that represents my heart
have given strength
strength that can give me the will to try once more
to try and keep going all the way
i think , no i believe that you have revived my heart
i believe in the eternal thing that helps me
i believe in the only voice that is true
i believe in the only heart that gives me hope
i believe in the only smile that makes me strong
i believe in the only look that keeps me worm and protected
your heart doesn't touch mine for pain
you didin't couse nothings but happyness to me
i keep seeing your smile , look and happyness that tells me you love me
in this day i chose this path that consists on your love
a path that continues nomatter what
a path to show you onething and onething only
and thats i trully , deeply and honestly
i Love you .....
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Old Jun 27, 2006, 08:28 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Re: one of the best love poems i ever wrote

lol it almost made me cry...which is very hard for me to do ^^ i love it it very deep and i love the part when she came and she helped u. that's my fav parts. i love all ur poems ^^ they so good.
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Old Jun 27, 2006, 01:13 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Re: one of the best love poems i ever wrote

very beautiful. if only i could write like you XD. the symbolism is wonderful. meaningful yet not overpowering. and the story about how you were depressed but brought back your strength was very well incorporated into it all.


a true story no? i know its happened to me. shes been there for me every day ive needed her but i dont want to get to far off topic ^.^;;;;
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