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As tears fall a deep blood red I fall,
broken and dead I'm calling out but no one hears me,
and I can't run from my fear,
demons beckon to me,
they smile sweetly;they heard my call,
promises whispered,
they beg me to stay I try and try,
but I can't pull away consumed by lies,
by hatred,
and fears now I am the one that everyone,
fears....
Last edited by flaminghate; Jan 27, 2007 at 06:15 AM.
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Seduced by Flesh
ok thanks for the advice^_^I'll work harder on my poems
i like this part out of all of it because it says alot aboutthey beg me to stay I try and try,
but I can't pull away consumed by lies,
by hatred,
how people respond when others try to help because the
trust thats needed to help isnt there, sort of sad buts it true
awesome poems cant wait to read another
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