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    The one that gave you birth.

    Insted of selfish or lazy or good for nothing,
    I wish for once she'd say she's proud of something.

    Cus it's so hard to find self worth,
    When the one that gave you birth,

    Is the one who hurts you the very most.
    To the point you wish you were a ghost.

    Or that you could run away and hide,
    Some place far, to find someone for your side.

    So you seek your worth in others hearts,
    But theres still that little part,

    That won't believe he could care for you,
    It just simply couldn't be true.

    Selfish, stupid and ugly too,
    How could anyone care for you?

    The thoughts they won't subside,
    Making you wish you were dead inside.
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    This is how I used to feel about my mother. Sometimes she still makes me feel like this but the instances in which she talks to me like that are almost non existant at this point. Thank god there are mothers out there that don't do this to their children. Too bad I only know a handfull. Did I mention the poetry squirts I seem to have? Hope it doesn't bother you too much.

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    Re: The one that gave you birth.

    Very good! I can understand what you mean about your mother. My mother was the same with me when I was growing up. I still do have some of those feeling that won't go away.

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    Re: The one that gave you birth.

    It's hard to get over things like that. Even when she's been nice and respectful for a long time I find myself on egg shells with her no matter what.

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    Re: The one that gave you birth.

    I liked it but then it started to get dumd so pretty good the ghost thing was the thing i did not like but keep writing.

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