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    One Last Rush

    Today is one of those sad days
    I met Ashley today; she’s a stoner and a drunk
    Mandy’s been drunk for four days now
    I hate it when people destroy themselves with that fuc*ing bullshit nonsense

    I asked why they did it
    The said because you lose control
    In life there is no control to be had
    Getting drunk and high is useless

    So useless
    None of them seem to understand it
    They will lose who they are if they don’t stop
    I just hate it all everything

    All the bad should go fuc* off in a ditch
    It all needs to die
    The anger and hate and cynicism
    It won’t, that’s the worst part

    There could be a million people who care like I do
    Who hate all this damn bullshit enough to scream
    But there would always be that one last rush
    Just sitting there, mocking anyone who gives a fuc*

    Everything will go blurry for them, all the hurt will come back
    Then they’ll realize they never knew themselves
    That there was no point to lighting that last joint
    To sipping down those last twelve drinks

    It’s all just a tragedy playing back frame by frame
    Tearing out another god damned piece of who they are
    Supposedly making everything better, taking away the guilt
    Until all that’s left doesn’t deserve to live

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    Yeah... this one is pretty angry as far as I go. Those two people in there, at the beginning, are real and everything I said about them is too. I hate it so damn much when people go out and hurt themselves with drugs and alcohol. It makes me sad that my friends are doing, they're all younger than I am damn it, and I'm not even eighteen... It's just so frustrating.
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    Re: One Last Rush

    Wow, yeah it was angry, but I can relate to it cause it's happening to one of my friends also! Yeah, I hate it when people throw their lives away. This poem is so nice and insperational! Good job!



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    Re: One Last Rush

    I struggle with chemical dependancy. So this hurt in a way. But the good hurt. It hurt like an overweight person gets hurt when a child calls them fat.

    It was like a smack in the face with some brutal honesty. And even if I didn't WANT to hear that... I needed to.. thank you.
    ... Not Ever Again...

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    Re: One Last Rush

    I'm sorry if I made you feel bad, but I can't help but hating the fact that people want to go out and die just because they feel light and happy. I didn't mean it as a stab to the people who use those terrible things, only to the things themselves and the fact that they use them.
    the love you withhold is the pain you carry.

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