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    One last time...... (Poem)

    I'll not make the same mistake again,
    and this time,
    how can I do such a thing in this ryhme?
    I'm basically waiting on your next text,
    your next words in my little world,
    so that i know your my girl.
    i'm carring for you now,
    and i never thought i'd fall for you...
    that's what i get for thinking that too.
    At first,
    you were just words,
    then a face,
    but now your voice put me in it's place....
    your heart.
    Since I'm here,
    I might as well stay,
    and with all my heart say,
    I love you Julia.
    Life has taught me about pain through fake love,
    and about the girls I thought I could dream of...
    but through the lyers,
    cheaters,
    and desperate love's I've held,
    your actually the one I can be with and dwell.
    i'll put on my ninja's outfit,
    cause it makes you smile,
    and i'll run around and act crazy every once in a while.
    I do these things cause I know that you'll be mine,
    cause YOU wanted all of this,
    and that made me happy in this time.
    Your my heart,
    and my armor.
    you keep strong when i'm weak,
    and with you I'd keep all my honor.
    I'll not touch you,
    if it's your wish my dear....
    as long as your willing to keep me,
    from sheding a tear.
    I'll fight for you my baby,
    only to see you fighting with me daily.
    so you take up your bow,
    and i'll take up my dagger....
    we'll split these demons in half,
    and then we'll do the latter.
    So let's do what we can,
    to make each other strong.
    I should have know true perfection,
    wasn't in my eyes all along.
    But,
    now that I've seen perfection,
    I can never love another woman.
    So I'll forever be your man.

    By: Justin McCormick (White Rose)

    If you want to read my stuff, go to my journal. I just needed one last poem here... for old time's sake. White Rose, out!!!

    Far be it for me to be anything special, when the only special thing I desire with me, is the special person I share my gifts with.

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    Re: One last time...... (Poem)

    Justin, I think you made me cry! I love you so much! Thank you for that! It really means the world...I love you!

    - Julia (Your Red Rose)
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    Re: One last time...... (Poem)

    A great piece of poetry, Justin!!! Been a while since I have seen you post on the boards. ^_^ Anyway! I really love this poem of yours, as I have loved the other ones that you wrote. Another GREAT love poem. The meaning is outstanding! Keep the brilliant work. And, I hope to see some more either on this section or in your journal.

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    Re: One last time...... (Poem)

    After all this time, I still love the magic in your words. It's been a long time since I've reviewed your poems of beautiful love, and you've already gone through a lot. This will probably be your last time, but the journey will continue on, and your poetry still becomes more wonderful and charming with every one.

    This poem is very awe-inspiring and still more powerful than before... a lovely song to the heart, a wonderful composition for the soul and a poem worthy of a lover with its simplicity, sincerity and majesty. I do hope this isn't your last one, though. Your poems are still wonderful than ever... keep on it, my friend ^-^

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    Re: One last time...... (Poem)

    This is a great poem man keep up the great work. It is nice to see this love between u 2 in a world full of hate. dont let that love go...ever.

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    Re: One last time...... (Poem)

    hey man that was awesome, keep it up man.

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    Re: One last time...... (Poem)

    just great man. this love is the one that gives the world a little hope

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    Re: One last time...... (Poem)

    This poem is touching, I like it.

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