one life

hyuuga13 · Aug 18, 2006, 06:49 PM

One life to give
One life to live
To give it all
Than lose it all
All i have is one life to live

N!tr0-Glyc3r1n · Aug 18, 2006, 08:00 PM

YAY!@!!!!! one that ryhmes splendid work!!! but alittle to short

*fayt lingod* · Aug 18, 2006, 08:21 PM

ok good poem, but ya this is a LITTLE SHORT. 4 lines is going too far.

*Baal* · Aug 18, 2006, 08:41 PM

Make a ''soneto'' style poem with that ritmo and its perfect.

For3v3r_Lost · Aug 19, 2006, 11:28 AM

It's a very good poem though it's a bit short. I like it when you wrote a poem about life. Very good. Keep it up!

Aug 18, 2006, 06:49 PM	#1 (permalink)
hyuuga13 Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Sep 2005 Location: Arvilla Posts: 324 Thanks: 5 Thanked 2 Times in 2 Posts Credits: 2,957	one life One life to give One life to live To give it all Than lose it all All i have is one life to live __________________ Why is everything so ****ing hard for me? Keep me down to what you think I should be! Must you tempt me and provoke the ministry? Keep on trying I'm not dying so easily!
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Aug 18, 2006, 08:00 PM	#2 (permalink)
N!tr0-Glyc3r1n Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: where ur not Posts: 290 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 513	Re: one life YAY!@!!!!! one that ryhmes splendid work!!! but alittle to short __________________ thank u SasuraiHell go -=NOOBZ=- clan!
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Aug 18, 2006, 08:21 PM	#3 (permalink)
fayt lingod Guardian of Heaven Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: in front of my computer Posts: 1,505 Thanks: 3 Thanked 5 Times in 5 Posts Credits: 4,474	Re: one life ok good poem, but ya this is a LITTLE SHORT. 4 lines is going too far. __________________ thanks to zyta for the sick sig and avy! click here myspace
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Aug 18, 2006, 08:41 PM	#4 (permalink)
Baal S.E.L - sexy etna lover Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Mayaguez Posts: 1,066 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 409	Re: one life Make a ''soneto'' style poem with that ritmo and its perfect. __________________ perdoname michelle!
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Aug 19, 2006, 11:28 AM	#5 (permalink)
For3v3r_Lost Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: My own little world Posts: 249 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 410	Re: one life It's a very good poem though it's a bit short. I like it when you wrote a poem about life. Very good. Keep it up!
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