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    one life

    One life to give
    One life to live
    To give it all
    Than lose it all
    All i have is one life to live
    Why is everything so ****ing hard for me? Keep me down to what you think I should be! Must you tempt me and provoke the ministry? Keep on trying I'm not dying so easily!

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    Re: one life

    YAY!@!!!!! one that ryhmes splendid work!!! but alittle to short


    thank u SasuraiHell
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    Re: one life

    ok good poem, but ya this is a LITTLE SHORT. 4 lines is going too far.

    thanks to zyta for the sick sig and avy!

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    Re: one life

    Make a ''soneto'' style poem with that ritmo and its perfect.



    perdoname michelle!

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    Re: one life

    It's a very good poem though it's a bit short. I like it when you wrote a poem about life. Very good. Keep it up!

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