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Oct 27, 2007, 08:26 AM
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 Diamond in the Rough  Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: Somewhere over the RAINBOW
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 Credits: 1,700 | One Life Dawn- I heard your name The stars above guide my way Sunrise- I saw your face The morning light warms my pace Noon- I feel your heat The sticky sweat stops my feet Dusk- I find your scent The shadow’s strength to me is lent Twilight- I taste your tears The moon only illuminates my fears
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Oct 27, 2007, 12:45 PM
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  Chtonian Slayer  Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: you really do not want to know
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Credits: 31,869 | Re: One Life Wow......this is really good!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Great job!!!!!!!!!
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Oct 29, 2007, 08:53 AM
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Credits: 59,502 | Re: One Life @.@ agreed..beutiful indeed..short..yet descriptively nice... amazing indeed... |
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Oct 29, 2007, 12:14 PM
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| Slippery When Wet~  Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: The wonderfull world of Minnesota! And I mean that!
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Credits: 157,450 | Re: One Life Wow! very new, I dont read poems like that every day! great job its something new.
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Nov 02, 2007, 04:14 PM
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| Angelic  Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: In a Demon's Arms
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Credits: 49,619 | Re: One Life Ahhh... how I missed this... really nice and really sweet and really simple... a nice, nice work Seirika!!!!! ^^ I really enjoyed reading this. It describes your feelings very well... the person this would be to would probably feel really loved... I really admire the fact that you could put so much in so little words... Nice work indeed ^^ I hope to see more! |
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