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    One Life

    Dawn-
    I heard your name
    The stars above guide my way

    Sunrise-
    I saw your face
    The morning light warms my pace

    Noon-
    I feel your heat
    The sticky sweat stops my feet

    Dusk-
    I find your scent
    The shadow’s strength to me is lent

    Twilight-
    I taste your tears
    The moon only illuminates my fears

    Become a wind, unfathomable distress. I'll hold back your loneliness.

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    Re: One Life

    Wow...An unique poem. It's beautiful and I like it. Keep up the fantastic work. [:

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    Re: One Life

    Wow......this is really good!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    Great job!!!!!!!!!
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    Re: One Life

    @.@ agreed..beutiful indeed..short..yet descriptively nice... amazing indeed...

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    Re: One Life

    Wow! very new, I dont read poems like that every day! great job its something new.
    I tryed to see things from your point of view but i cant seem to get my head that far up my ass!
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    Re: One Life

    Ahhh... how I missed this... really nice and really sweet and really simple... a nice, nice work Seirika!!!!! ^^ I really enjoyed reading this. It describes your feelings very well... the person this would be to would probably feel really loved...

    I really admire the fact that you could put so much in so little words... Nice work indeed ^^ I hope to see more!

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