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Old Oct 27, 2007, 08:26 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Dawn-
I heard your name
The stars above guide my way

Sunrise-
I saw your face
The morning light warms my pace

Noon-
I feel your heat
The sticky sweat stops my feet

Dusk-
I find your scent
The shadow’s strength to me is lent

Twilight-
I taste your tears
The moon only illuminates my fears
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Old Oct 27, 2007, 09:39 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Wow...An unique poem. It's beautiful and I like it. Keep up the fantastic work. [:
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Old Oct 27, 2007, 12:45 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Wow......this is really good!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Great job!!!!!!!!!
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Old Oct 29, 2007, 08:53 AM   #4 (permalink)
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@.@ agreed..beutiful indeed..short..yet descriptively nice... amazing indeed...
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Old Oct 29, 2007, 12:14 PM   #5 (permalink)
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Wow! very new, I dont read poems like that every day! great job its something new.
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Old Nov 02, 2007, 04:14 PM   #6 (permalink)
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Ahhh... how I missed this... really nice and really sweet and really simple... a nice, nice work Seirika!!!!! ^^ I really enjoyed reading this. It describes your feelings very well... the person this would be to would probably feel really loved...

I really admire the fact that you could put so much in so little words... Nice work indeed ^^ I hope to see more!
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