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    One piece puzzles

    I walked down a dirt path
    and came upon a rabbit.

    The rabbit had no eyes,
    only hollows filled with fireflies.

    I walked farther into the woods
    and saw a light coming from a
    tree ahead of me.

    Down fell a zebra that was
    very polite. He told me which was was out.

    I followed the path that he zebra said
    and came upon a rose bed.

    The roses then spoke to me and said,
    "fetch us water or will we dry out, we hide a
    precious thing no doubt."

    I wondered if I should fetch the pail,
    or let myself fail.

    The roses melted away.

    Behind the blackened thorns of
    what was, there lay a woman in a wooden burrow.

    She wore nothing but a cloak
    and she held a long, thin pipe out
    of which came scarlet smoke.

    And behind the scarlet smoke
    I could see her eyes were made of of mirrors, and her
    tounge was that of a serpent.

    The woman spoke and said,
    "the roses you let die, now I will
    give you what you have killed for."

    I stood there upon the burned
    remanants of my slaughtered prey,
    as the woman took my hand.

    She led me down a diamond encrusted
    path, where she replaced my eyes with tulips.

    The boy I gave directions to looked very weary.
    Dear Dinah...

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    Re: One piece puzzles

    i liked this poem its really
    diferent and its like a dream
    that has so many peices that you
    cant really make since of it.

    im not really sure what else to say but
    that this pom is really cool and i have had
    dreams that were exactly like that and thats
    pretty cool.
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: One piece puzzles

    Thank you ^-^.

    That was the feeling I was going for when I wrote. I wanted people to feel like they were in a dream, but a familiar dream if you know what I mean?
    Dear Dinah...

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    Re: One piece puzzles

    yeah i do and you got that effect very weel in this poem
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: One piece puzzles

    wow...lol....i got lost in translation...never had a dream like that b4 >_< ...but now I probly will because ill be thinking about this poem for a while....

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