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    One Too Many loves!

    Tears fall down like pouring rain
    thoughts of you remain the same
    everytime i turn around i see you
    in everything around me.

    The cool wind brushing my cheek
    reminds me of your touch as we
    embrace, how i miss that loving
    feeling you gave.

    How the rain reminds me of the
    pain of love, those tears just keep
    pouring like the rain, how i wish things
    would stay the same.

    Nothing you ever say will put it back
    the way it was , even if you promiced
    me the world it wouldnt put back the
    love that was put into us.

    You keep saying that you love me
    but all i see is you with them ,love cant
    work both ways thats why i have to walk away
    you can cry all you want but that want bring me back.

    So beforei disapeari want to say that our love
    was never real , the reason i say this because
    your still with them and refuse to be with only
    one of us and that game i will not play.
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    this poem shows how love can only work one way not 2
    fpr the simple fact that if you cant love one person and
    HAVE to have 2 guys/girls you dont know how to really
    love anyone its just an infatuation which hurts everyone.

    and it also shows my point of view that if you become
    somones gf/bf nad decide that you need somone on the
    side that you never loved the person you are/were with
    to begine with and you are just playing a ignorant game.

    comments and suggestions are welcomed
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: One Too Many loves!

    The words are truly magnificent in this poem........they go perfectly with the title and they express your emotions and feelings
    the poem is excellent
    Great job!!!!!!!
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    Re: One Too Many loves!

    bim glad you liked it and i hopw this poem
    does help someone out that is having that
    problem
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: One Too Many loves!

    "How the rain reminds me of the
    pain of love, those tears just keep
    pouring like the rain, how i wish things
    would stay the same."

    Stay the same? I wonder, what does "same" mean to you? I wish things would change forever. Anyway, good poem Holder! Its been so long since I've been on here, it really is nice to see such heartfelt work.
    ... Not Ever Again...

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    Re: One Too Many loves!

    the same for me means before the straying eye or
    the feeling that you need somone else because those
    things to me mean the love was never there to begin
    with.

    and thanks for the complament and the heart is
    where the meaningful words come from
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: One Too Many loves!

    The poem was a good one, like i expect of you. The many loves that many of us share are often the reason or love is destroyed, and this poem is the truth from the heart. Nice work.

    I know of that pain. It was the same for me. Be safe, and I pray you be well soon. You'll find someone that is a 2 way love. She will love you, as you will love her as well. I know, I am finding that love now, as you and others said I would.

    Far be it for me to be anything special, when the only special thing I desire with me, is the special person I share my gifts with.

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