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Old Dec 05, 2007, 02:49 PM   #1 (permalink)
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One Too Many loves!

Tears fall down like pouring rain
thoughts of you remain the same
everytime i turn around i see you
in everything around me.

The cool wind brushing my cheek
reminds me of your touch as we
embrace, how i miss that loving
feeling you gave.

How the rain reminds me of the
pain of love, those tears just keep
pouring like the rain, how i wish things
would stay the same.

Nothing you ever say will put it back
the way it was , even if you promiced
me the world it wouldnt put back the
love that was put into us.

You keep saying that you love me
but all i see is you with them ,love cant
work both ways thats why i have to walk away
you can cry all you want but that want bring me back.

So beforei disapeari want to say that our love
was never real , the reason i say this because
your still with them and refuse to be with only
one of us and that game i will not play.
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this poem shows how love can only work one way not 2
fpr the simple fact that if you cant love one person and
HAVE to have 2 guys/girls you dont know how to really
love anyone its just an infatuation which hurts everyone.

and it also shows my point of view that if you become
somones gf/bf nad decide that you need somone on the
side that you never loved the person you are/were with
to begine with and you are just playing a ignorant game.

comments and suggestions are welcomed
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Old Dec 05, 2007, 03:16 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Re: One Too Many loves!

The words are truly magnificent in this poem........they go perfectly with the title and they express your emotions and feelings
the poem is excellent
Great job!!!!!!!
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Old Dec 05, 2007, 03:19 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Re: One Too Many loves!

bim glad you liked it and i hopw this poem
does help someone out that is having that
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Re: One Too Many loves!

"How the rain reminds me of the
pain of love, those tears just keep
pouring like the rain, how i wish things
would stay the same."

Stay the same? I wonder, what does "same" mean to you? I wish things would change forever. Anyway, good poem Holder! Its been so long since I've been on here, it really is nice to see such heartfelt work.
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Re: One Too Many loves!

the same for me means before the straying eye or
the feeling that you need somone else because those
things to me mean the love was never there to begin
with.

and thanks for the complament and the heart is
where the meaningful words come from
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Re: One Too Many loves!

The poem was a good one, like i expect of you. The many loves that many of us share are often the reason or love is destroyed, and this poem is the truth from the heart. Nice work.

I know of that pain. It was the same for me. Be safe, and I pray you be well soon. You'll find someone that is a 2 way love. She will love you, as you will love her as well. I know, I am finding that love now, as you and others said I would.
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