I have someone that keeps me going through the day.
He's the one who saves me from The fears in my heart.
You can see it in my eyes he means the world to me.
No matter what I do I could turn to him for anything.
He's the keeper of my heart, he holds it in his hands.
My thoughts are filled with his loving face and his warm embrace.
With my last breath I will tell him how much I love him.
How I will never do anything to hurt him.
I really liked your poem. Here is another version of it try not to use and start out with so many you's. Tell this as if your explaining him to someone as if your trying to get them to see what he means to you and what all he's done in your life. Great Job and keep up the good work.