Thread: One true love

This was a nice poem, fredsboo. The only thing I can say that annoyed me was the "your" used repeatedly in the poem, but spelled the wrong way. The correct form is "you're". I'm sure you knew that, and it was just a frivolous mistake. Nice work overall. Keep up the good work

thank u I kinda thought it was a little bad not my best lol

Great poem except for a few grammatical errors. 'your' should be written as "you're" and there seems to be a mistake on the last word, again. Mix up in letters.
Other then that, this is a very good poem. Keep it up ^ ^

I have someone that keeps me going through the day.
He's the one who saves me from The fears in my heart.
You can see it in my eyes he means the world to me.
No matter what I do I could turn to him for anything.
He's the keeper of my heart, he holds it in his hands.
My thoughts are filled with his loving face and his warm embrace.
With my last breath I will tell him how much I love him.
How I will never do anything to hurt him.

I really liked your poem. Here is another version of it try not to use and start out with so many you's. Tell this as if your explaining him to someone as if your trying to get them to see what he means to you and what all he's done in your life. Great Job and keep up the good work.

Thanx everyone i had hoped someone would like it................................................ ......

Very romantic poem. I have been lucky enough to find true love and I'm never gonna let it get away. Great job

It's awesome ^_^ I love it. I dore it! xD
Anyways, I like the way the words are used and how they create and image in your mind.