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Reply With QuoteThat peom makes me so sad,. I liked how it flowed, but sad. Why do poems have to be sad,
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you say you know me,oh so well,
you say you love me, but you put me though hell.
you dont know me deep inside,
you dont know the feelings that i hide.
like everyonr else,you know what you see,
like everyone else you dont know me.
i hide behind the image made,
i'm dead untell that image fades.
i'm not this person i want to be free,
i'm not this person,i want to be me.
life is hard,life is tough,
called a slut goth and stuff.
i just want to die,just want to go,
slit me wrists and watch the blood flow.
ok i know its lame i wrote it 2 years ago i just found it
That peom makes me so sad,
Attitude of AO MODS, according to beast
Because they have obtained that level they are arrogant. You have to kep in mind when you talk about these guys they are kind of dorks who probably didn't excel at much and this is their only outlet to flex their muscles. Their egos would suffer no less so the the forum suffers some more. Watch one way or another they will probably repond to this post with a threat. But there are better forums out there. Private messege Zev.
Sad one. Make happy ones oki? ^_^ I like it. Catches my attention.
i have i few lovey dovey one i just dont really like them
You should still post them. Who knows the comments would make you feel better? ^_^
There's a few grammar issues. If you need any help with the capitalizations and punctuation? Feel free to message me.
Seduced by Flesh
that's what i noticed most of the poems being posted.
Sad and depressed and then dies.. (uh-oh)
what's happening to the human heart??
hehehe.. Nice poem though, keep it up!
Try to make the title into a little bit more catchy..
If you don't like me, it's mind over matter.
I don't mind and you don't matter
thanx i really dont know what i was thinking writing this its from 2 yeas ago and my poety kind or sucked then
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