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    the one you dont know

    you say you know me,oh so well,
    you say you love me, but you put me though hell.
    you dont know me deep inside,
    you dont know the feelings that i hide.
    like everyonr else,you know what you see,
    like everyone else you dont know me.
    i hide behind the image made,
    i'm dead untell that image fades.
    i'm not this person i want to be free,
    i'm not this person,i want to be me.
    life is hard,life is tough,
    called a slut goth and stuff.
    i just want to die,just want to go,
    slit me wrists and watch the blood flow.



    ok i know its lame i wrote it 2 years ago i just found it

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    Re: the one you dont know

    That peom makes me so sad, . I liked how it flowed, but sad. Why do poems have to be sad, . Especially the ending, .
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    Re: the one you dont know

    Sad one. Make happy ones oki? ^_^ I like it. Catches my attention.

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    Re: the one you dont know

    i have i few lovey dovey one i just dont really like them

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    Re: the one you dont know

    You should still post them. Who knows the comments would make you feel better? ^_^

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    Re: the one you dont know

    There's a few grammar issues. If you need any help with the capitalizations and punctuation? Feel free to message me.
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    Re: the one you dont know

    that's what i noticed most of the poems being posted.
    Sad and depressed and then dies.. (uh-oh)
    what's happening to the human heart??
    hehehe.. Nice poem though, keep it up!
    Try to make the title into a little bit more catchy..

    If you don't like me, it's mind over matter.
    I don't mind and you don't matter

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    Re: the one you dont know

    thanx i really dont know what i was thinking writing this its from 2 yeas ago and my poety kind or sucked then

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