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    Ones' His Story

    One was told happiness comes at a price
    It must be true cause every time one strive for it
    One fall short, so One guess his dollars isn't right

    Living in the past, dying in the present & looking towards the future
    Holds no glory
    This isn't a book of Ones' life, but you can call it his story

    Being taught by Ones' own faults
    Things One should of, would of, could of, or ought
    -of done-

    Lost a father, a father lost a son
    Lost LOVE & loved Ones... Either by DEATH
    or by the other reaper which is his self

    This is a cold lonely world when all One has is himself
    Especially when One push others away & can't trust anyone else
    One has no one to blame, but Ones' self

    In life things don't go as One plan
    One has to be strong in the legs & just stand
    One has got knocked down plenty of times

    One days did not always shine
    One prayed for the night cause even in darkness
    The moon will shine

    One never experienced the pure sugar cane
    life has to offer, but knows
    the sourness taste of life's lime

    Is all this punishment for Ones' crime
    One is trapped in Ones' mind
    Will One be set free in due time

    Living in the past, dying in the present & looking towards the future
    Holds no glory
    This isn't a book of Ones' life, but you can call it his story

    One seems to be looking through a mirror of me
    ?Strange cause One resembles my history?
    But One is now Two cause this story is WE

    *All along this was a mirror of me....

    The heart can't lie... Truth is... I love you!!!

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    Re: Ones' His Story

    This reads like some pretty fly lyrics. But there are some parts where the wording gets confusing. Lucky for you, I'm on your level ^^... I was able to see past the confusion and see where you were going with it. Maybe later I will edit this post to pin-point where I think things get a little confusing in the wording. But right now I lack the energy.. (I'm kinda sick)

    I went to a huge rap show at a club last night, and while I'm unsure that this was meant to be rap... or even lyrics for that matter... It very well could be. Do you have good stage presence?.. I bet people would love to see you perform spoken word.
    ... Not Ever Again...

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    Re: Ones' His Story

    wow that was really good im like speechless i dont know what to say but that was amazing!!!!

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