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    Only Time

    It is said that love is blind
    Have I been wrong all along?
    Am I following a blind heart?
    Is what I see a lie?

    Only time can tell what is true
    Only time can tell if I was wrong
    Only time can tell if my heart is blind

    Will my heart regain it's sight?
    Will my heart show my the light?
    Will my heart bring me to my senses?

    Only time can tell if I will regain sight
    Only time can tell if I will ever see the light
    Only time can tell if I will come to my senses

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    Re: Only Time

    I really like how you wrote this poem.......using the questioning style.........it makes this poem seem more unique and creative.....
    And the words are excellent for the title..
    Great job!!!!!!
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    Re: Only Time

    it was okay it was choppy i really didnt care for it but keep righting peoms you well get better k bye.

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