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Oct 01, 2007, 07:06 AM
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 Diamond in the Rough  Join Date: May 2007 Location: Salt Lake City, U.T.
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 Credits: 1,530 | open to a new world Open to a new worldBlushing and grinning from ear to ear. Laughing for all to hear. While fullilling our dreams, as we hold each other near. Two hearts once was seperated, now combinded to create a whole . With the doors now open, we step through with a long journey finally completed. Soring through the air with nothing to fear. Our love pure as light for all to see, as it's been guided by star. Though the darkest shodow of the night. Were one was empty, the void has now been filled. With the light of new day, and the dawn of new world. this was written myself and ichgo_06 thanks and i you all enjoy this peace Last edited by chrystalann2004; Oct 04, 2007 at 06:08 AM. |
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Oct 01, 2007, 07:23 AM
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 Dragonrider  Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: On the back of my dragon escaping everything and ignoring the pain.
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Credits: 4,744 | Re: open to a new world hey you know my appinion on this alreay but just thought I would say here, verry good, (even though we wrote it together) lol good job keep it up.
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Oct 01, 2007, 07:34 AM
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Credits: 31,439 | Re: open to a new world Beautiful!!!!! Very poetic words that are full of meaning!!!! Great job!!!
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Oct 02, 2007, 12:57 PM
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| Diamond in the Rough  Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: In a house. ._.
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Credits: 6,397 |  Re: open to a new world one word.... PERFECTO,,,kk it was awsome, very romantic indead   i wonder.............. ^__^ keep up the good work -zainab
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Oct 02, 2007, 03:07 PM
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| Diamond in the Rough  | Re: open to a new world i liked it, you should work on the grammar a little but it was very beautiful. it really did have a lot of emotion in it. it translated out from you poem, something that is hard to do. well i liked it.
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Oct 03, 2007, 05:26 AM
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Credits: 59,148 | Re: open to a new world some spelling mistakes.. but the poem overall was good ^^ u need to work on em spellings..  Nice.. ^^ keep up the good work  |
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Oct 03, 2007, 09:31 AM
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Credits: 1,530 | Re: open to a new world thanks for all of your feed back and happy you all like . and i will work grammer as well thanks again for the comments |
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