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    An Optimistic Core




    An Optimistic Core

    Darkness gives rise of sadness,
    Sadness that causes several sins,
    Sins that make a person feel,
    Feel submission to eternal defeat.

    Psyche's being harshly stroked,
    Stroked by the past memories,
    Memories of a hundred people,
    People who never shown concern.

    Blaming all of it to cruel life,
    Life that is always unjust and unfair,
    Unfair in the sense of choosing,
    Choosing a being susceptible to losing.

    I have been to that road before,
    Before I met a special someone,
    Someone who became my sunshine,
    Sunshine that saved me from darkness.

    Giving emotional warmth,
    Warmth that I once thought,
    Thought it was mere dream,
    Dream now he makes to reality.

    This optimistic core shows beauty,
    Beauty in everything he sees,
    Sees positive out of the negative,
    Negative is a thing he will never miss.

    “In spite of the troubles,
    He never gave up hope
    An optimistic feeling that
    Everything is going to turn out well.”


    >>>> i just poured my emotions to that poem. you may post critiques and comments for it may help me in the future. thanks for reading ^^
    Last edited by raja_psyche; Sep 22, 2006 at 04:37 PM.

    Thank you very much,Reese for this wonderful signature ^_^

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    Re: An Optimistic Core

    Nice pic and poem too...^_^

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    Re: An Optimistic Core

    Wow! This is soooo awesome Raja!! I soo loved it! The emotions that you put into your poem are so powerful,I could so feel them! Awesome job Raja!
    Made by- Ryomakurosaki (Thank you sooooo much!!) ^__^

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    ^^
    wow thanks Pride and Shini for reading and commenting on my poem
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    i do appreciate^^

    Thank you very much,Reese for this wonderful signature ^_^

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    Your poems, all of them, I mean, are so very meaningful and beautifully written. This, just like all the rest of your pieces, carries a sweet meaning ~!!! I fully enjoyed reading this poem. Thank you, and be sure to share more.

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    Thanks Kedar for posting a comment about this poem that i made. it just feels good to channel out emotions into writing.
    I'll be sharing more poems if time permits.

    Thank you very much,Reese for this wonderful signature ^_^

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