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    Orange County Suite

    Well I used to know someone fair
    She had orange ribbons in her hair
    She was such a trip
    She was hardly there
    But I loved her
    Just the same.

    There was rain in our window,
    The FM set was ragged
    But she could talk, yeah,
    We learned to speak

    And one year
    Has gone by

    Such a long long road to seek it
    All we did was break and freak it
    We had all
    That lovers ever had
    We just blew it
    And I'm not sad

    Well I'm mad

    And I'm bad

    And two years
    Have gone by

    Now her world was bright orange
    And the fire glowed
    And her friend had a baby
    And she lived with us
    Yeah, we broke through the window
    Yeah, we knocked on the door
    Her phone would not answer,
    Yeah, but she's still home

    Now her father has passed over
    And her sister is a star
    And her mother smokes diamonds
    And she sleeps out in the car

    Yeah, but she remembers Chicago
    The musicians & guitars
    And grass by the lake
    And people who laugh'd
    And made her poor heart ache

    Now we live down in the valley
    We work out on the farm
    We climb up to the mountains
    And everything's fine

    And I'm still here
    And you're still there
    And we're still around

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    Re: Orange County Suite

    Oh my god... this is sucha great poem-story!!!!!!!!! Wonderfull!!!! So lovely, it made me all dreamy and in love (eee... don't ask with whom, I haven't got the slightest idea...)!!!! great work!!!! Truly magnificent!!!!!! I love it... simply love it!

    Made me think, made me smile and made me sad... great work... ^^ I love it! Love it! Love it! *jumps around* ^^ one of my favourites from now on...

    I'll be waiting for more!!! *grabs the poem and runs off*

    My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge

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    Re: Orange County Suite

    Quote Originally Posted by Lasura View Post
    Oh my god... this is sucha great poem-story!!!!!!!!! Wonderfull!!!! So lovely, it made me all dreamy and in love (eee... don't ask with whom, I haven't got the slightest idea...)!!!! great work!!!! Truly magnificent!!!!!! I love it... simply love it!

    Made me think, made me smile and made me sad... great work... ^^ I love it! Love it! Love it! *jumps around* ^^ one of my favourites from now on...

    I'll be waiting for more!!! *grabs the poem and runs off*

    Maybe u should try searching this poetry part of forum for my other songs,,,just do advanced search with mu nickname and there u'll have more of me

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    Oh so... you have more here? nice... sorry... I'm quite new that's why I don't know, this is the first poem I read by you, I'm almost sure of that ^^ I haven't read all the poems that were here before I came... ^^ I'll do it now then ^^ thanks

    My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge

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    Hm,u have something about 988 post and i've got only 27 which makes u older than me

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    Re: Orange County Suite

    aha... I hope you feel ashamed and will post more ^^ jk I understand... almost

    Now, ok, sorry if this is against some rules, but, since all the threds of his previous poems are closed but I want to coment on some of them soooo much, I'll do it here, k? ^^

    Speech...
    I have no idea how it is to feel like that- I never had, I've always found something good in bad and always looked forward in life with hope, with a confidence that "everything can get only better now" (if I'm in deep sh*t), so I must say this poem brought something new in me, you've manged to describe your feelings well enough...

    Glass Heart
    I loved this line: "Sometimes you want me when I hate your touch"
    I can just imagine that...
    and the mood altogether... well it's good created, because it def. made me feel somthing... it brought back bad memmories...

    Frozen Heart
    WOW!!! I really must say this one is great!!! Wonderful work with the descriptions and I could really feel that the lyrical "me" cares much about this girl. It also reminded me of a story that I wrote a long time ago and I think this was just the push I needed to continue with it... Great work! I must really thank you for this one!

    I don't mind
    Something alike what I could write... only mine would be shorter and not as hounting...
    This one really took me away and brought me to another world... nice work with that!!! I read it holding my breat... it's great!!! nice work!

    Wonderland
    Just the poem I needed... somewhat a week ago... it's great... talks about someone like me... that's why I love it so much... nice adapation of wonderland

    I really like the way you write! And will be waiting for more...

    My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge

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    Re: Orange County Suite

    AWESOME!!!!!!!!! I love this poem!!!!!! It's just so amazing and it just seems so perfect really!!!!!!!!!! This poem is just so ..... I can't find any great words to describe it but it's just fantastic!!!!!!! I hope to see more!!!!
    「When I'm sad, I stop being sad and be awesome instead」

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    Re: Orange County Suite

    OMG!!!!love this poem its so...so..i cant even think of words right now keep it ↑ sad though almost made me but i love it so emtional and powerfull meanings great work.*runs after lasura*wait i want it!!*jumps up and down *great work on this though*runs off*
    ♥~*The Princess*~♥
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